Big Mac discovers that, when he's wearing his new horse collar, he makes fillies that touch him feel good. Real good. Sadly, this isn't as amazing as it sounds.
...this...this was pretty amazing. Everything that Fluttershy just vocalized was exactly what I was thinking while reading this story. I have to give a big bravo to you for the excellent job you did, there were a lot of places you could have gone wrong with this story but you handled it with masterful precision. I do have to say that I was hoping for a little more resolution between Fluttershy and Big Macintosh though, some sort of outward forgiveness from her and maybe they ended up together. I know you wanted the FlutterMac to write itself from here, but it feels a little to open ended for one to be able to draw their own conclusions in that regard. But that's just the fanatic FlutterMac shipper in me talking . The story has been a pleasure to read nonetheless and I am sad to see it end, I hope you do many more great works in the future.
Yeh now that's what I'm talking about everything I was thinking and I'm so happy fluttershy got a backbone and spoke up. I can see things being fixed but never being the same which I a good thing because everyone seemed to be going around in circles in their lives. I just really hate the rainbow dash didn't get at least a touch in. Maybe the next chapter off to read it lol.
3133355 yeah but did you here her critisise her self? she should have asked if he ment to hurt her not just straight up die inside. she also should have enlistid big mac alone insted of leaving him. plus he bucked pinkie so what he thought that they would never be together
What gives Fluttershy the right to be so self-righteous? She called him a rapist to all her friends for touching her, it made her aroused be so could just touching someone you have a crush on! She then had the never to act the victim with Pinkie Pie, because she had the nerve to have sex with a confused and sexually-frustrated single stallion. The only one that has the right to be angry with Pinkie was Big Mac, but Stuttershy still had the nerve to stick her pretentious, disproving, self-righteous nose in it and scold her. This is why I hate Fluttershy, even in the show, she has two personalities; perpetual victim and disproving mother.
Actually she never said rape. They came to that conculsion on their own without talking to her. Yes he made her feel sexual pleasure without asking. And yes he knew about it before hand. And yes it wasn't consensual, although she might've consented if asked. But she didn't say she was raped. Just what he did to her. The others went about screaming rape.
And it was a dick move on Pinkie Pie's part to take advantage of a sexually frustrated, confused, single stallion. Especially with her experience in this Verse. So really she didn't do anything wrong. As she said. Rares injected herself into this just to feel self-righteous rather than just be there to listen. Twilight took her own sexual fantasies into her own hooves against a victim she felt she had the right to "punish". Pinks just upped and fucked him when she heard that he had Sex Powers. And AJ instigated all of it by getting off on her brother.
Flutters was violated yes. But she never said anything about getting raped, only that he came into her house, used magic to sexually arrouse her, and that she felt her trust had been violated.
This is going to be one hell of a letter to Princess Celestia.
...this...this was pretty amazing. Everything that Fluttershy just vocalized was exactly what I was thinking while reading this story. I have to give a big bravo to you for the excellent job you did, there were a lot of places you could have gone wrong with this story but you handled it with masterful precision. I do have to say that I was hoping for a little more resolution between Fluttershy and Big Macintosh though, some sort of outward forgiveness from her and maybe they ended up together. I know you wanted the FlutterMac to write itself from here, but it feels a little to open ended for one to be able to draw their own conclusions in that regard. But that's just the fanatic FlutterMac shipper in me talking . The story has been a pleasure to read nonetheless and I am sad to see it end, I hope you do many more great works in the future.
Yeh now that's what I'm talking about everything I was thinking and I'm so happy fluttershy got a backbone and spoke up. I can see things being fixed but never being the same which I a good thing because everyone seemed to be going around in circles in their lives. I just really hate the rainbow dash didn't get at least a touch in. Maybe the next chapter off to read it lol.
3133355 yeah but did you here her critisise her self? she should have asked if he ment to hurt her not just straight up die inside. she also should have enlistid big mac alone insted of leaving him. plus he bucked pinkie so what he thought that they would never be together
What gives Fluttershy the right to be so self-righteous? She called him a rapist to all her friends for touching her, it made her aroused be so could just touching someone you have a crush on! She then had the never to act the victim with Pinkie Pie, because she had the nerve to have sex with a confused and sexually-frustrated single stallion. The only one that has the right to be angry with Pinkie was Big Mac, but Stuttershy still had the nerve to stick her pretentious, disproving, self-righteous nose in it and scold her. This is why I hate Fluttershy, even in the show, she has two personalities; perpetual victim and disproving mother.
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Actually she never said rape. They came to that conculsion on their own without talking to her. Yes he made her feel sexual pleasure without asking. And yes he knew about it before hand. And yes it wasn't consensual, although she might've consented if asked. But she didn't say she was raped. Just what he did to her. The others went about screaming rape.
And it was a dick move on Pinkie Pie's part to take advantage of a sexually frustrated, confused, single stallion. Especially with her experience in this Verse. So really she didn't do anything wrong. As she said. Rares injected herself into this just to feel self-righteous rather than just be there to listen. Twilight took her own sexual fantasies into her own hooves against a victim she felt she had the right to "punish". Pinks just upped and fucked him when she heard that he had Sex Powers. And AJ instigated all of it by getting off on her brother.
Flutters was violated yes. But she never said anything about getting raped, only that he came into her house, used magic to sexually arrouse her, and that she felt her trust had been violated.