Big Mac discovers that, when he's wearing his new horse collar, he makes fillies that touch him feel good. Real good. Sadly, this isn't as amazing as it sounds.
So wait a second. Not only does it make mares orgasm the longer they touch it, but it also seems to draw them to it as well!? And I think it's even fucking with Macintosh's mind as well! They need to get that demon yoke off of him now!
I really like how the characters are being written. I can feel the tension in these conversations and yet still feel like they lay within the boundaries of the characters themselves.
Oh, and you should like, throw some more mares in the mix for Mac to maximize shipping teases.
Thanks to everyone who's given a specific thing they like or dislike. I've never written any stories before this one (and another science fiction one that I started last week, also on fimfiction), so I really appreciate it.
Applejack reached out and was about to gently pat Big Mac on the back before her hoof tensed up, and slowly withdrew. "Bes' you stay away from her an' let this blow over."
I'm guessing that autocorrect just got tired of fighting with you so it doesn't add the apostrophes any more.
Another Excellent chapter!
He headed to Zecora's?!! It'll be morning by the time of the forever sex rutting.
So wait a second. Not only does it make mares orgasm the longer they touch it, but it also seems to draw them to it as well!?
And I think it's even fucking with Macintosh's mind as well!
They need to get that demon yoke off of him now!
I really like how the characters are being written. I can feel the tension in these conversations and yet still feel like they lay within the boundaries of the characters themselves.
Oh, and you should like, throw some more mares in the mix for Mac to maximize shipping teases.
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Thanks to everyone who's given a specific thing they like or dislike. I've never written any stories before this one (and another science fiction one that I started last week, also on fimfiction), so I really appreciate it.
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Sagana! Sagana!
Pegemot! Astarot!
Sagana! Sagana!
Aksafat! Sabatan!
Tenemos, Tenemos,
Allegremos!
Sagana! Sagana! Va!
... And that's all I have to say about that.
P.S. If you can get that reference without looking it up, you deserve a homemade strawberry tart!
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Why is it a 'rape collar' now? Wouldn't it theoretically work just as well with consensual sex? :p
azereath, azereath. yeath, yeath. no one will get this referance. video game easter egg.
I'm guessing that autocorrect just got tired of fighting with you so it doesn't add the apostrophes any more.