Big Mac discovers that, when he's wearing his new horse collar, he makes fillies that touch him feel good. Real good. Sadly, this isn't as amazing as it sounds.
Big Macintosh groaned deeply, thrusting himself forward. Sweat trickled down his brow as he loosed a roaring moan. He put all his bucking strength into each thrust, hammering his weight forward mercilessly. He was out of breath and sore, but he couldn't stop now. He was so close to finishing. With a final volley he thrusted again and again, plowing harder and harder. Until finally... finally... he reached the end of the field.
Shit, for a second, you had me thinking you were already starting this story with a scene. You really had me going there!!!
One mistake and one potential mistake... I'm no professional editor though.
Big Mac wasn't one for fussin' over a little friendly gloating. He had been known to do it himself when the tables were turned, so he nodded sagely once again, and replied, "Yeeup."
A period or a comma, really.
Big Mac finally removed his ropes, and turned to make his way toward the orchard. He turned back to Applejack, "Apples need buckin.' Ye comin?"
3114278 or it makes mares get horny when ever they touch the guy wearing it
So this is about Mac and Flutter...? I don't like this shipping but I wanna read more.
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No, shipping between Mac and Fluttershy is not the primary focus of the story.
Shit, for a second, you had me thinking you were already starting this story with a scene. You really had me going there!!!
Awesome foreshadowing!
One mistake and one potential mistake... I'm no professional editor though.
A period or a comma, really.
A period or a comma. Probably a comma.