When Rarity and RainbowDash get trapped in the boutique, thing start to heat up between them.
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Good story
Yea not bad some mistakes but I don't care
Dat Ending Sentence!
This is a good story, but something about it tells me your a first time writer, and I gotta say, for a first, this is actually pretty good, could use some work, but good none the less. i look forward to seeing how you progress through your writing. i'll be watching.
*insert creepy stalker staring face here*
wha...
Seems like more could be added