• Published 13th Aug 2013
  • 901 Views, 6 Comments

Home For The Holiday's - symphonicBliss



When Rarity and RainbowDash get trapped in the boutique, thing start to heat up between them.

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Comments ( 6 )

Yea not bad some mistakes but I don't care

Dat Ending Sentence!

This is a good story, but something about it tells me your a first time writer, and I gotta say, for a first, this is actually pretty good, could use some work, but good none the less. i look forward to seeing how you progress through your writing. i'll be watching.

*insert creepy stalker staring face here*

Seems like more could be added

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