Caught between zealots promising death without mercy, and thirsting gods promising salvation for servitude, the Mane 6 make a choice... a choice that changes everything.
A small lapse of judgment on Rarity's part sets in motion a series of events leading to realization, admission and development of the feelings of three mares for Spike. How will this affect their friendship? Who will win his love? Read and find
Well that was interesting. Didn't really explain very much, but then I suppose that only made it all the scarier.
All in all, pretty good. I like the ending especially. I really feel like this could be expanded upon though, it just seems to set itself up so well for a sequel.
Well that was interesting. Didn't really explain very much, but then I suppose that only made it all the scarier.
All in all, pretty good. I like the ending especially. I really feel like this could be expanded upon though, it just seems to set itself up so well for a sequel.
It didn't "set itself up" for a sequel.
IT DEMANDS A SEQUEL.
I DOTH DEMAND THIS PIECE OF LITERATURE BE BESTOWED A SEQUEL, AND I SHALT USE THE ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE TO GET IT IF I MUST!
Sweet Celestia.
Oh god wow. Wow. That was... wow. Loved it.