Charlotte and George live in a world where Pokémon don't exist, that is until they find a Pichu encased in ice. They go see Dr.Max and he sends them on a quest to return it to it's home. Meanwhile in Ponyville, A unicorn named Twilight sparkle finds a Torchic. As our hero's paths collide, Tragedy strikes. Discord has taken notice of this and sends Pizza201 (I EVIL >:D) and her minions to "Take Care" of Twilight Sparkle and her Torchic, while he deals with a certain pink-maned yellow pony...
I KNOW THIS IS DUMB AND WILL BE REWRITING THIS WHEN I HAVE TIME.
Chapters (4)
Advice: Make the chapters longer. At least 1000 words a chapter shouldn't be too much.
2974392 Thanks! I guess I kinda have that problem when writing stories.
2974447 Best you could probably do is completely rewrite the story and make it less rushed. I'm sure you'll start getting thumbs up then.
2974483 Thanks. I'll try that! Expect new and approved chapters!
The description gave me cancer.
2976102 Why????