The Changelings have returned, and they want nothing more than to see Equestria in flames. However, they`re about the get the surprise of their lives, the UNSC.
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You are on a roll today. I haven't seen anyone type this fast.
I know you added a comedy tag to this but, the calmness of Laskey about this is just getting to me.
wtf are we in the sixth movie of Harry Potter. not that there's anything wrong with that movie.....
ah, the good 'ol Ooman race. they tried to kill me once. and succeeded four times. Good thing I'm bonded to my echo ka'kari.
~well, you were the only one out of 65,000 teen yautja that I liked~
yes, and I am greatly appreciative that you chose me.
Have an odd feeling this was done purposefully...
I'm waiting for them to steal the elements.
Fohamer is dead . E 419 is dead .died on 04
NO! Those impossibly ridiculous and stupid Marine BDUs from Halo 4 are NOT real! I refuse to accept it, it was just a visual error in the game. Nooooope!
Ponies: "The true path to harmony is to be friends and not fight?"
Humans: "What if the other guys have something I need to feed my family and there isn't enough to share?"
Ponies: "....Oh silly! That's impossible!"
Humans" ...riiight.....okay, what if someone attacks me?"
Ponies: "Stop, drop, and roll!"
Humans: "...You're an idiot."
She forgot to do the Universal Greeting , one should never forget to do that.
It seems you suffer from the same trope problems that are so common to this brand of stories. First Contact scenes between two peoples, races, worlds, species, and/or dimensions are ALWAYS staggeringly awkward and horribly written in my honest opinion. Don't feel too bad, only a select few ever managed to write a semi-plausible such scene. Still, hopefully, the story will begin to improve now.
However, I can easily see that you have never served in any type of military or even real leadership role before. The amount of back talk, lack of discipline, and the disrespectful comments that several of the characters made to their commanders/royalty was just downright PAINFUL to read. I truly do hope you managed to fix this problem in the coming chapters.
Where's Chief? Will he be in this story? Any Spartans?
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From Transformers?
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Yep.