The Changelings have returned, and they want nothing more than to see Equestria in flames. However, they`re about the get the surprise of their lives, the UNSC.
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Terrific. Keep going on with the story.
if you played all through spartan ops, then you should know that at the end, doc. halsey has one of her arms amputated. sort of a small plot hole, but saying she clapped her hands together kinda threw me off. if she got a prosthetic, say so. other than that, i like it so far.
the U.N.S.C. didn't arrive alone. My dreadnaught followed them. I am Dachande! protector of this planet, and the only yautja known who is currently living in peace with the ponies of equis.
the Oomans arrived at th border of space for this system and I followed from there, I was gathering resources at the time and noticed their arrival.
If I may make a recommendation, maybe you should make the chapters longer; I'm not asking for a denser story, it's just that so far there have been chapter endings where a simple setting change seemed more appropriate.
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How does one Spartan? JK. I think you meant this: ' no choice but to, Spartan, ' . Just one comma can lead to a gramatical nightmare.
PS: I used that line... thing... to separate the correction from the comment, does anyone know what that thing's called? Or what its intended use is?
"But how would the rest of the cats and snails have learned from their comrade’s mistake?" This mistake here is having two beings, one cat and one snail, being described using the singular comrade’s instead of the plural comrades’.
"But how would the rest of the cats and snails have learned from their comrades’ mistake?"
I hope a certain 'demon' from the UNSC returns to help battle this new foe. Being Sierra-117 Master Chief.