After a fire breaks out in the Everfree Forest, Princess Celestia recruits Fluttershy to track down the resident dragons and find out why they set fire to the Forest, but when Fluttershy discovers the truth, she has a hard time revealing her findings to the princess.
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Aside from some grammatical errors, this was a pretty good story. One thing really bugged me, however. You said that dragons can't produce flame with a cold... well, ya might wanna see the very end of Winter Wrap Up again. Other than that, I enjoyed reading.