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GySgt Buck


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Dimitri Danikovski is am older brony and a member of a criminal organization. A situation arises that causes Dimitri to meet a fellow brony in extenuating circumstances. Unfortunately, crime is thicker than friendship and Dimitri makes a decision he quickly regrets.

Downtrodden, Dimitri returns to his apartment and discovers a strange visitor. He is put on trial by Discord and has to defend himself against all his previous crimes. Celestia agrees to be the prosecution and Luna, in turn, is Dimitri's defense. What will happen to this most unusual of bronys?



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Surprisingly, the best part of this story, IMO, doesn't take place in the courtroom. I think you'll see what I mean when you get to it. This one got away from me. I originally wanted this to be a one on one Q & A with the Mane Six, and Discord comparing Dimitri to each one of them, offering evidence that Dimitri was loyal and honest (in a twisted way to his criminal family) and that he was generous, kind, and even shared laughter (helping out his friends and donating to and volunteering with orphanages and the like.) But I opted for this, and I'm happy with how it turned out. I hope you enjoyed reading it because it was fun to write.

I also intend to make a short (4K words or less) entitled Twelve Angry Ponies that covers what happens when the jury leaves for deliberations. Check back later!

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Comments ( 13 )

Like, woah.
Like + Favorite.

bronies - organized crime never thought about it before but im glad GySgt Buck did :rainbowlaugh:

hmm... that ending was a surprise however... not entirely unbelieveable :pinkiesmile: good job :scootangel:

Are you kidding? Rainbow Dash is best pon- *gunshot* "Wrong answer."

...Whoah.
Liked! :pinkiehappy:

best pony... :applejackunsure:

I've been thinking (ooh did it hurt *very funny*) and i still haven't come to any conclusions, I like all the mane six (although rarity is on the bottom of the list) but I prefer the side characters. if anypony my top favorites are:

Derpy (her characteristics and her eyes her bubbly personality, just everything

Rainbow Dash }
Applejack } for obvious reasons i like these two

Twilight (although i don't think i like books as much as she does, nor do i get that crazy... ever)

Pinkie Pie (although i only like her randomness and her comedic value)

Fluttershy (because who doesn't)

DJ-P0N3 (Octavia is too snobbish for my taste)

Big-Macintosh (so awesome... nuff said)

And this is incomplete?

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....Genius.

960307 DAMN...knew I forgot something. I do plan to do a side story to what the ponies discussed in the jury box. :rainbowhuh:

Whoa. Just whoa.
I kept stumbling upon this fanfic and, I'm ashamed to admit, I always shrugged it off due to my own prejudices. Today, though... today I decided to give it a try. And boy, I'm glad I did.
I liked the setting and all (even though it is a little fast-paced; if you ever think about reviewing it, this is something you should consider addressing), but I kept thinking to myself: "Oh, he's going to get free and love & tolerance will change him forever."
I admit that I snickered when he promised Luna he'd never kill anymore. Out of contempt. I told myself "I knew it! I knew this fanfic was a fucking waste of time."

But damn. Damn! That last paragraph made me vomit my preconcepts just so it could shove them down my throat, spit in my eye and scream "Fuck you!" right in my ear.

My mind hasn't been punched in a while. And although I'm happy that this fanfic was able to give me a gentle slap, I still thirst for more!

This is definitely going to be featured on the One-Shots group!

7.5/10

10/10 would read again.

Discord interrogates him?
Totally not based on Star Trek or anything ...

That is what I'm say, f*** this way of magic and friendship b*******. Once you to the store in life either live or die by it if you're going to will it down sword. You can never be clean if you keep bathing in blood Just Go With It he chose the right path for his life. F*** the passive!

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