Damn that chapter beginning was a tease.... I WANT MOAR but I do have to say that was very accurate to what would happen, if somewhat disappointing at the same time that certain events didn't occur. But hey, I'll wait.
I was starting to wonder when those enchantments on the CMC would resurface. And poor Babs probably won't get one because she isn't nearby where Mender can keep an eye on her for malfunctions/misuse.
I would assume next chapter will cover the altercation between Twi and Shy, very eager for the next update!
The bolt of magic exited her horn and punched right through the center of my shaft. It momentarily felt like somebody put an icicle through it completely
No Kiro, THAT is Ouch! that is very much Ouch with a side of Owie
OK, if Twi is this impulsive, inconsiderate and flat-out dangerous around her stallion, I wouldn't even let her within line-of-sight of Mender and Fluttershy's (eventual) foals.
Gah, i'm so goddamn sure Rarity is so happy because she committed to Spike. That would explain why she wants to talk to everypony, sort of telling them the good news i guess... But now i have to wait another few weeks for confirmation And by the way, am i the only one who wants Keela in the herd too? I mean, she is able to switch into the Equestrian Universe, and she kinda loves/likes Mender. That would be awesome but will probably never happen :( Whatever, nice chapter. Dat MoonPie though
Honestly I like Twilight in this, but at this point I don't think she deserves to be in the herd anymore. The whole thing with Twilight is just getting annoying at this point. Twilight and Mender being fearful of each other and Twilight constantly hurting him is just getting old. With how much they start building up their trust and then only Twilight going out hurting Mender and actually earning the fear causing mistrust is making the shipping hard to see working. The constant forward and back is not gonna work much longer. They really need some heavy intervention on Twilight, she needs to get through her head to her heart the problem.
Sorry if I'm the only one that thinks this way, but spelling Babs' accent gets very confusing and annoying to read. It's the same for Applejack and Apple Bloom, but not quite as much so because I can understand what I'm reading. I get that you want to convey that they have accents, but I think that you could lose about 80-90% of the phonetic spelling and still convey that.
If this was realistic, Twilight would have been dump like a dozen times by now, the first few times a mistake sure, but when they reach double digits, it's intentional.
ouch poor mender.... when i first read that scene i though she had taken a core not a density scan, so all the ouches were had
Damn that chapter beginning was a tease.... I WANT MOAR but I do have to say that was very accurate to what would happen, if somewhat disappointing at the same time that certain events didn't occur. But hey, I'll wait.
Fir out.
I was starting to wonder when those enchantments on the CMC would resurface. And poor Babs probably won't get one because she isn't nearby where Mender can keep an eye on her for malfunctions/misuse.
I would assume next chapter will cover the altercation between Twi and Shy, very eager for the next update!
Well....that was....disappointing. Not the chapter', just was psyched up to see Mender and Twi together. but meh.......I can wait
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I'm gonna kill you.
And thus, Twilight became a feminist extremist.
Goddamit Twilight.
Purple autism strikes again.
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No Kiro, THAT is Ouch! that is very much Ouch with a side of Owie
OK, if Twi is this impulsive, inconsiderate and flat-out dangerous around her stallion, I wouldn't even let her within line-of-sight of Mender and Fluttershy's (eventual) foals.
Gah, i'm so goddamn sure Rarity is so happy because she committed to Spike. That would explain why she wants to talk to everypony, sort of telling them the good news i guess... But now i have to wait another few weeks for confirmation
And by the way, am i the only one who wants Keela in the herd too? I mean, she is able to switch into the Equestrian Universe, and she kinda loves/likes Mender. That would be awesome but will probably never happen :(
Whatever, nice chapter. Dat MoonPie though
Ummmm... what the hell kind of normal situation would ever occur to reveal that....?
Ummmm... what the hell kind of normal situation would ever occur to reveal that....?
Honestly I like Twilight in this, but at this point I don't think she deserves to be in the herd anymore. The whole thing with Twilight is just getting annoying at this point. Twilight and Mender being fearful of each other and Twilight constantly hurting him is just getting old. With how much they start building up their trust and then only Twilight going out hurting Mender and actually earning the fear causing mistrust is making the shipping hard to see working. The constant forward and back is not gonna work much longer. They really need some heavy intervention on Twilight, she needs to get through her head to her heart the problem.
Poor Mender I can relate to his suffering *shivers* :S
5277334 Don't forget the glass of Chateau de Pain
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5276666 i approve of this :D
Sorry if I'm the only one that thinks this way, but spelling Babs' accent gets very confusing and annoying to read.
It's the same for Applejack and Apple Bloom, but not quite as much so because I can understand what I'm reading.
I get that you want to convey that they have accents, but I think that you could lose about 80-90% of the phonetic spelling and still convey that.
Owwww.....poor Mender. No one deserves to be zapped in the dick.
That actually caused me to squeak as i read it...
Still a good chapter.
If this was realistic, Twilight would have been dump like a dozen times by now, the first few times a mistake sure, but when they reach double digits, it's intentional.
Could the reason why mender has a baccalum Be because he also has the claws? Like it's a part of his cybernetics and not his natural biology?