O_O ...What?

hoooo shit WTF just happened here and second how is Joe's doughnut open 30 years ago dose every one in his family work at the shop or have the name Joe and 3. Cestia a manipulative little spoiled bitch I can see that

that's a bucking kick in the face what a twist

2800859 Thank you! Your support is appreciated

2800911 SO FRIGGIN MUCH EDITING IS NEEDED.
This story have potential, but must be edited
2656661 You`re welcome. And remember, if you need an editor or proofreader or just advise, PM me.

It's rushed as shit. Try to improve your descriptions, the story feels crappy written.
Rest is good though, good premise and idea.

2969712 Thanks for the help, In fact I am writing a Discolight story right now and I will go back to add more description to the areas. Check out my story when it come out if you could.

2969748
I will, Discolight is my favorite Discord pairing.

Aha! I finally found you, and it looks like you aren't doing too bad. Keep up the work and don't be lazy. Plus you should really try to not make as many spelling and grammar mistakes when you right the rough drafts. I remember spending so much time correcting all of that stuff for you.

Ah well tootles.

~From your beloved sister

2990187 Hey you be quiet, it's not like your a REAL editor! (JK Shes a proofreader)

When's the next chapter coming out?

3633103 School has been busy I was actually thinking about wrapping it up on winter break.

3639292
Okay.

Is anypony still here?