2656228 Sorry about that, I am just getting used to writing these stories. Thank you for the advice though, I will try and put in more detail and make the story more dense. Thank you for the feedback!
2668600 Discord is going to be hero but he still needs to be Discord. Thank you for your feed back it helps a lot. Plus I wanted to have the affect of an antagonist becoming a protagonist.
2656228 Sorry about that, I am just getting used to writing these stories. Thank you for the advice though, I will try and put in more detail and make the story more dense. Thank you for the feedback!
2655446 Thanks, I was going for interesting.
can be better
2668600 Discord is going to be hero but he still needs to be Discord. Thank you for your feed back it helps a lot. Plus I wanted to have the affect of an antagonist becoming a protagonist.