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interesting so far
Um..... wat?
It`s SO rushed, i can`t understand a thing
Royal house of chaos?
This intrigues my insides
2656228 Sorry about that, I am just getting used to writing these stories. Thank you for the advice though, I will try and put in more detail and make the story more dense. Thank you for the feedback!
2655446 Thanks, I was going for interesting.
whoa whoa whoa I thought you said Dis was going to be a hero so WTF is this Jigsaw shit
Well that was a twister
2668600 Discord is going to be hero but he still needs to be Discord. Thank you for your feed back it helps a lot
. Plus I wanted to have the affect of an antagonist becoming a protagonist.
i can´t wait for the next
hay Celstia karma is a bitch ante's it
time for a flash back heart breacker
2668600 He was trapped in stone for a few thousand years.
2685625 Sorry about that, I forgot to mention that this is not canon. I figured that that was apparent from the alternate universe tag. I am very sorry about not making that clear, I hope you keep reading my story though. Comments like yours tell me I need to be more clear about the story, thank you
O_O ...What?
in trib to Discord I say his song shall be Iron Man by Black Sabbth
hoooo shit WTF just happened here and second how is Joe's doughnut open 30 years ago dose every one in his family work at the shop or have the name Joe and 3. Cestia a manipulative little spoiled bitch
I can see that
that's a bucking kick in the face what a twist
nice and for a bonis here is derpy
i am so ready for the next chapter
This is interesting.......
2800859 Thank you! Your support is appreciated
2656228
Yes, but other than the pacing this is actually quite a good story, the it could stand some revisions.
2800911 SO FRIGGIN MUCH EDITING IS NEEDED.
This story have potential, but must be edited
2656661 You`re welcome. And remember, if you need an editor or proofreader or just advise, PM me.
It's rushed as shit. Try to improve your descriptions, the story feels crappy written.
Rest is good though, good premise and idea.
2969712 Thanks for the help, In fact I am writing a Discolight story right now and I will go back to add more description to the areas. Check out my story when it come out if you could.
2969748
I will, Discolight is my favorite Discord pairing.
Aha! I finally found you, and it looks like you aren't doing too bad.
Keep up the work and don't be lazy. Plus you should really try to not make as many spelling and grammar mistakes when you right the rough drafts. I remember spending so much time correcting all of that stuff for you.
Ah well tootles.
~From your beloved sister
2990187 Hey you be quiet, it's not like your a REAL editor!
(JK Shes a proofreader)
When's the next chapter coming out?
3633103 School has been busy I was actually thinking about wrapping it up on winter break.
3639292
Okay.
Is anypony still here?