“It’s easy to tell. It sticks, like, straight out. Most of the time when he’s staring at Applejack.”
nein, nyet, ne, non, geen, jo, heç bir, ez, няма, কোন, не, walay bisan, 没有, nej, neniu, ei, hindi, არ, όχι, આ બોલ પર કોઈ, pa gen, לא, नहीं, tsis muaj, nincs, ekki, tidak, aon, ノー, ora ana, ಇಲ್ಲ, គ្មាន, 아니, ບໍ່ມີ, nulla, nē, ebda, नाही, هیچ, nie, não, nu, нет, hakuna, ingen, இல்லை, సంఖ్య, ไม่, yok, немає, کوئی, không, dim, קיין.
after i've completed the 1st chapter edit: Yesss. So much yesss. Yeah i know it's kinda creepy wanting to have sex with non-existing magic sapient miniature horses of wild colour, but wanting to have sex with non-existing fillies of magical sapient miniature horses of wild colours is a whole another level of creepy. And screw people's opinion, i really did liked this chapter. 2607671 fucking yes, bro, fucking yes.
Twilight’s sleep spell left a funny taste in my mouth when I woke up next, in the basement of her house.
I'm sorry, for some reason this particular line struck me as intensely funny. My brain immediately went, ah yes, the "Does this rag smell like Chloroform to you" spell. A classic.
I was popping around the internet, found a blog post about people incorrectly MST3K'ing stories. This saddens me. While the original MST3K concept certainly isn't for everyone, the MST3K crew were usually pretty cool with the source material, at least riffing it based on its own merits. Actually, the above line would probably be a pretty good example of the sort of "inserts" a good MST'ing should have. I'm sorry you've had bad experiences with it.
I'm not a big fan of clop specifically for the sexual content, you understand, but I DO read the genre and there IS a lot of bad clop out there.
Nothing you've written that I've seen is something I'd call bad. Although as a fan of longer stories, I can say I'd like to see a few more of these ideas developed into longer narratives. That's purely a personal preference, you understand. There are a few things you've written that aren't to my personal tastes, but not because the writing was BAD, and since you certainly weren't put on this earth to write solely to appease me (or at least, you aren't until the mind control satellites are in place ) I'm willing to let it pass.
I do not understand the impulse to tear down another writer. Constructive criticism is one thing; what I saw in that blog post were personal attacks.
Anyway, I seem to have gotten off on a tangent, and for that I apologize. I just wanted to let you know that this particular line tickled me, and share a bit of my thought process regarding it.
Oh god...what am I becoming ....I enjoyed this immensely though I feel extremely shameful...well I know im going to hell now, might as well go head-first!
I think people like you just like to see people like me cringe. Anyway, it needs retelling: Super-terrifically amazing first chapter, minus some typos.
It's like a dream come true, this whole project. My favorite clopfic author tackling the sexiest filly to the ground and working her over?
Thanks for the present, darf. You didn't have to do this, but I'm really glad you did. Because, really, all the unfs.
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Why...Am I impressed by this?
This image...is no longer valid.
Damn near spot on with Hotsauce, including the end. I love it, more detailed then his/her work, same iconic ending, and more feels!
GodDAMN!
soul
Was that joke intentional?
I'm supposed to study roman law of classical era for my exam right now. If I fail... pretty much worth it!
This is so wrong...
But it's so well written...
Must resist urges...
WITH PUNCHING!
Okay... on to the next chapter...
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see you in a cell for foalphiles! at least you won't be alone XD
Strange..clop that didn't really make me want to clop. It was just a very enjoyable read. Sexy, sweet, and funny. Very nice.
lolwut...
nein, nyet, ne, non, geen, jo, heç bir, ez, няма, কোন, не, walay bisan, 没有, nej, neniu, ei, hindi, არ, όχι, આ બોલ પર કોઈ, pa gen, לא, नहीं, tsis muaj, nincs, ekki, tidak, aon, ノー, ora ana, ಇಲ್ಲ, គ្មាន, 아니, ບໍ່ມີ, nulla, nē, ebda, नाही, هیچ, nie, não, nu, нет, hakuna, ingen, இல்லை, సంఖ్య, ไม่, yok, немає, کوئی, không, dim, קיין.
NEIN JUDEN
ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NO
FUCKING NO
after i've completed the 1st chapter edit:
Yesss. So much yesss. Yeah i know it's kinda creepy wanting to have sex with non-existing magic sapient miniature horses of wild colour, but wanting to have sex with non-existing fillies of magical sapient miniature horses of wild colours is a whole another level of creepy. And screw people's opinion, i really did liked this chapter.
2607671
fucking yes, bro, fucking yes.
I must say, this was incredibly enjoyable and not just for the clop! Well done!
Another amazingly hot inappropriate clop writing by darf.
GREAT DAMN JOB!
Crusty Socks? Best damn thing I heard.
NOPE
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let me see the title...
what exactly did you expect you idiot
Well, there goes my soul. Hell sounds like a fun place
2597671 for some reason, that went completely over my head
Well written, good job.
SCOOTALOO, Y U STARE AT BIG MAC'S DICK?!
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Yeah, I heard it's nice this time of year.
I'm... pretty sure that Twilight hasn't learned to sew. Only Rarity and Fluttershy seem to have any inclination for it.
you had me at
3205510 I Just Got Back. I Recommend Visiting Burning Seas Beach Resort.
I'm sorry, for some reason this particular line struck me as intensely funny. My brain immediately went, ah yes, the "Does this rag smell like Chloroform to you" spell. A classic.
I was popping around the internet, found a blog post about people incorrectly MST3K'ing stories. This saddens me. While the original MST3K concept certainly isn't for everyone, the MST3K crew were usually pretty cool with the source material, at least riffing it based on its own merits. Actually, the above line would probably be a pretty good example of the sort of "inserts" a good MST'ing should have. I'm sorry you've had bad experiences with it.
I'm not a big fan of clop specifically for the sexual content, you understand, but I DO read the genre and there IS a lot of bad clop out there.
Nothing you've written that I've seen is something I'd call bad. Although as a fan of longer stories, I can say I'd like to see a few more of these ideas developed into longer narratives. That's purely a personal preference, you understand. There are a few things you've written that aren't to my personal tastes, but not because the writing was BAD, and since you certainly weren't put on this earth to write solely to appease me (or at least, you aren't until the mind control satellites are in place ) I'm willing to let it pass.
I do not understand the impulse to tear down another writer. Constructive criticism is one thing; what I saw in that blog post were personal attacks.
Anyway, I seem to have gotten off on a tangent, and for that I apologize. I just wanted to let you know that this particular line tickled me, and share a bit of my thought process regarding it.
Keep on keepin' on, man.
Oh god...what am I becoming ....I enjoyed this immensely though I feel extremely shameful...well I know im going to hell now, might as well go head-first!
I think people like you just like to see people like me cringe.
Anyway, it needs retelling: Super-terrifically amazing first chapter, minus some typos.
I feel like we're all devolving here. Nice story though,
4261987 I know how you feel dude. Its stories like this, good or not, that make me question my sexuality entirely.
And thus began my inevitable decent into whichever circle of hell is reserved for sexual deviants. An excellent story
Twilight sewing something? That sounds dangerous.
my
This is so hot
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First Impressions
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The Special Hell.