I'm going to have to start from the beginning. It's been a while, but I shouldn't have any trouble rereading it.

Biggest problem: Need to indent more often.

6462767 Shouldn't be that much of a problem. Personally I feel like I started writing this story half-assed, and it is my duty now to get it done right and proper. Thing is, I started writing this back then ago because I just wanted to get involved in ponies. Now that time has passed, and so on and so on, I'm just going to finish this story for the sake of the plot development and characters. I've actually started writing down separate notes for facts and information to help me write, instead of just sitting down in one go and typing.

I'm also old enough now to deal with taxes and legal alcohol, so that leads to be that my creative process has changed. Not sure in which direction, but any direction is better than going no where at all.