2618859 Not necessarily a 4th wall break. This is about Quantum universe's coming together (complex stuff), and Discord was being a punk messing with the story
I kinda published the first chapters in first draft form, which is why people weren't very interested in this... That's what I get for being impatient. Thanks for the support!
Hey, the next chapter is going to be a long one, and I'm kinda booked for the next weeks or so. Don't worry though, I'll have time to write during my travels so stay shiny!
This has a crossover tag, but what is it a crossover of? The description is interesting, but what does "...Dordogne Incident in 1999, ITC's Recon Department..." mean?
2645913 It's a crossover of Micheal Crichton's books Timeline and one specific other. The Dordogne Incident was the plot of Timeline, which was written in 1999, and the ITC Recon Department is something I invented. ITC is a company that built a quantum computer that allowed quantum foam travel to specific points in space-time. Don't worry, the next chapter will explain it.
So what brought on the confusing 4th Wall break? The story would have been fine without it.
...and where are the rest of the comments? Feels weird not seeing any for the last four chapters.
It's a brilliant start, i enjoy the story so far and look forward for more, and the last part with Discord cracked me up
Keep it up!
2618859 Not necessarily a 4th wall break. This is about Quantum universe's coming together (complex stuff), and Discord was being a punk messing with the story
I kinda published the first chapters in first draft form, which is why people weren't very interested in this... That's what I get for being impatient. Thanks for the support!
Hey, the next chapter is going to be a long one, and I'm kinda booked for the next weeks or so. Don't worry though, I'll have time to write during my travels so stay shiny!
This has a crossover tag, but what is it a crossover of? The description is interesting, but what does "...Dordogne Incident in 1999, ITC's Recon Department..." mean?
2645913 It's a crossover of Micheal Crichton's books Timeline and one specific other. The Dordogne Incident was the plot of Timeline, which was written in 1999, and the ITC Recon Department is something I invented. ITC is a company that built a quantum computer that allowed quantum foam travel to specific points in space-time. Don't worry, the next chapter will explain it.