Consider the Codex chapter to be in ... 'early alpha' stage
Decided on this initial formatting so feedback is massively appreciated as I continue to add more lore into it as the weeks go by. Hope you enjoy the lore!
First things first, super big thanks to my editor and proofreader, JoshuaGrahamPony, for helping me immensely in crafting the story. Having a second opinion to spark discussion over small details is always valued and I'm glad he helped me in that regard.
WARNING: Spoilers ahead! Do not read past this point unless you feel comfortable with that!
Star Wars was part of my childhood. Calvin & Hobbes was also part of my childhood. Both I look back to for nostalgia purposes. Let these pics bring in my epic childhood dreams (and some current, as well.)
So I just discovered that the site updates some months back broke the color text formatting in parts of Five Star Service, causing the opening editor notes text colors to spill over into the main chapter sections. I've fixed what I can from work, but a careful check will have to wait until I'm home. For those who have encountered that issue already, apologies.
I had a blast with Doug McFunny!
Note: Dialog and Scenes may not be Precisely the Same in the Actual Story
IN A GALAXY FAR, FAR AWAY...
(An X-83 Twintail Starfighter flies by, heading towards a watery world surrounded by a giant ring of debris.)
EVERY GENERATION HAS ITS CHALLENGES
(TIE Predators emerge from an Imperious-class Star Destroyer.)
Oh man, that’s tempting cover art
Edit: Here’s a link to the artist’s DA
The title pretty much sums it all up. Fo:E-TGH is about ready to release a new chapter and more chapters there in after.
PLEASE NOTE THIS: The story itself may be locked for a short amount of time. This is to make sure that I paved over grammatical mistakes or plot holes that I may have missed in my initial edit. This is due to the fact that Fo:E-TGH never had a rough draft nor prewright.
I have finished the last chapter of the story "FoE: E-201" and am just posting the final audio chapter here!
I had a lot of fun reading and recording this story! I recommend giving it a read!
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Priest and I wrote a thing. Here it is. It's legit TERRIBLE. Like. Zero redeeming qualities.
But by god, it was so much fun to write. I'm only like, a little ashamed. It was that fun.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/386104/clown-and-out
Enjoy or don't, I'm happy either way. Just don't blame Priest if you hate it, was definitely not his fault.
...okay, like 10% his fault.
-Pencil
So this was another fun chapter to edit and read. I also realized that while editing it apperently my auto correct thought the word Gas Station was too close to Gestation and decided to 'fix' that for me. Talk about hilarious typo. Of course I fixed it.
Here is the chapter: Chapter Nine
As always thanks for reading. XD
*start Echo Log*
"Hello this is jac- I mean Timothy who every is listing this...*ahem* I AM NOT THE REAL JACK... let that get out first I am... not the real jack I am Timothy Lawrence who was got the surgery performed by Dr. Autohn to look like jack so in case someone tries to kill jack they will kill his double.
Here's a preview of the next chapter for Aether. It's still in development. Don't worry! It will be published soon! Be on the lookout for the chapter to drop!
Spitfire: Hey, you look like you're new around here. What's your name? The mare asked the human being.
Mob: My name is Shigeo Kageyama or Mob for short. It would be nice if you called me by Mob. I'm used to it very well. Mob scratched his head.
Things just keep getting more and more intense.
Chapter is here: Chapter twelve
So the chapter is out. It's been a minute since I've edited this, what with all the original fiction stuff going on, but I'm always glad to return to the thing that really got me back into writing, ponies.
The chapter is here: Chapter Fifteen
As always thanks for reading. XD
If your interested in checking out my free original fiction you can click here.