Another chapter of The Cupcake Chronicles has been turned into a comic.
You can view the new chapter here: http://edwardleuf.org/comics/NewComics/20180520-CC/Chapter06/
Some visible scarring, and pony of wisdom may occur.
Let's go for chapter 4 and as an introduction to this one, I'd like to mention that Project Horizons is definitely more fun to read than FO:E, mainly because the heroes aren't self-righteous assholes crying each time they see a scraped pony somewhere. It's refreshing to see something written in a most correct fashion. However, this chapter like the others have some good and... some bad too. Some things are worrying and some are encouraging to say things plainly.
"I had strings…"
"But, now I'm free…"
"There are…No strings on me…"
"Weh-well…uh…ha-hah…It's not that far now…"
"Get the Power Star!"
"Mama Mia! We have'eh ah problem'e, Luigi…"
"Go…as fast as you can…Go! GO!"
"BRRRIIIIIIIIYAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHGGGGGAAAAHHHHH!"
"KA-ME-HA-ME-HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"
"GIVE ME THAT WAND!!!"
"Meh-Mega Man?! You're Real?!"
"Yoshiii!"
"That thing?! That…is no dinosaur…"
This chapter is a bit uneventful but I'll try to talk about two important things that I think can help Project Horizons improve. Yes, the fiction is done and I cannot change it but it is interesting to see why this chapter fails in some aspects and where there are strengths that could and should have been expanded upon in order to create something really different. So yes, while some things pissed me off, I'll be far more calm in this blogpost.
Let's go !
And so I reach the halfway point in terms of chapters. This chapter is not a bad one, hell I would even go as far that it allows for a bit of a reconciliation between me and certain characters. I don't think they are god awful (except BJ and GB, they can burn) but I always was disappointed in P-21 never adressing the death of his lover more than in passing. Glory also disappointed me in just being BJ's supporter and not much else. This chapter makes them have some real personality and some
Another whining chapter and at this point, I am running out of things to say. Should I remention how much of an hypocrite BJ is being by both whining about her coming to terms with being a killer, an executioner while, in the same breath, kill dozens of lives in the purest gorey fashion ? Should I talk about how self-destructive she is obviously being by drinking like an alcoholic and overdosing on drug injections ? This characterization of Blackjack is unfortunately going in circles.
This chapter was mostly fine until... the end that infuriates me on so many level that I think I'll have to explain, as usual, in details why what Somber tried to do failed. I do consider there's such a thing as going to far and being beyond redemption. It is something I need to discuss here. As for the rest of the chapter... Well, let us review it.
Let's go !
Usually I have some stuff or another to say about a chapter because I think that I usually am passionnate enough to try and analyze or comment on things that were interesting, intriguing or mind-boggling. Not with this chapter because chapter 11 is a dull one with little to nothing happening in it and with absolutely uninteresting characters.
Let's go ?
What’s up, guys? AMU back in the house, and with something a little different than my previous posts, really.
Today, I’m gonna be making my very first movie review for here (which is not the first movie review I have ever made in actuality) of Netflix’s “The Christmas Chronicles”
So, folks, there's gonna be three last blogs on the book, I think... This one, one on release day, and one for when I get paperbacks, hardcovers, and the audiobook in order and out. As it turns out, the magic of digital printing means I can publish physical copies no sweat. I just need to look a bit more into them first.
I have an actual vacation on the way after a full month of extra hours. It’s been approved for next week, and I plan to do little but decompress and catch up on chores. Actual travel will be limited to maybe a day at the beach.
The new chapter is at 15.2k words and still not done, with it very likely to be broken up again. I see a natural breakpoint developing after all the memory replays are shown, and once again, it would seem best to let them—and the alternate perspective of events/major and minor revelations they show—have the spotlight instead of extending the chapter to include a major trailing M-rated scene. So it will end on the doorstep of it as our favorite Tribune finally manages to fatally offend
Here comes the second one of these chronicles and I do have some things to say regarding this second chapter even if I'm not sure they'll be as positive as I would have wanted to say. Project Horizons seems to create some expectations out of me that I'm not sure it'll be able to capitalize on.
Let's go with the jumbled thoughts.
For all the love and support I’ve gotten the last couple weeks over my blog posts on the story, I’ve decided it’s only fair to reward everyone with a new C&C chapter, which I will be starting this week. It will be sharing creative space with the next chapter of Midnight Rising, which I’m in the middle of writing as we speak, but I’ll aim to have a completed C&C draft out in three weeks, and a chapter launch in time for April 1st.
Yep, that's right folks, today is a double chapter simply because I read the two mostly in a row and I didn't want to to split them in two. So, chapter 17 is essentially a big pile of nothing happening unfortunately and chapter 18 is... well, it's something alright.
Let us start.
The fifth chapter of Project Horizons is upon us and with it, more confirmation of the utter "Indiana Jones"-like style of adventure and some welcomed evolutions of character relationships. However, I have to say, I am not quite sure if I dig the idea of having one brain for three people. Let us go and have some fun.
I think it's time for me to give some compliments to Project Horizons since, while it has a fuck load of issues, sometimes chapters like this one can actually give some lovely moments that usually are counter-balanced by stupid and idiotic decisions but here let us talk a bit about the good and the usual bad.
Let's go !
On to the third chapter of this wild ride and also the shortest chapter of the entire fiction but I have to say, not the worst and should I even say that this is the best chapter so far for a few things already and it is the character that will cement an affirmation that was already pretty obvious : Project Horizons is a better story than Fallout: Equestria. Is it without serious faults ? God, no.
Let's open the curtain.
Hey, all. I needed to extend to release date on Talons and Fangs by a month. Pro tip here, but if you write a real book, don't wait on getting the cover art. By the time I realized I needed it now, I could only give the artist a month to work on the cover art. Close as it was, the artist I picked was awesome enough to finish with some fantastic art just about in time, but there was also no time to correct a few... important things that needed correcting. The sketch I got--while
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