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Aug
25th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #7 — Lost and Never Found · 3:10am Aug 25th, 2015

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Today’s story relies on not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is incredibly blunt, I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.


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Oct
31st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #12 — Just A Simple Story · 8:28pm Oct 31st, 2015

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I don’t like catering to holidays, but here’s a review for Halloween anyway. Any time is a good time to review Dark fic.


Title: Just A Simple Story

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Jan
23rd
2016

Taking Review Requests [CLOSED] · 11:36am Jan 23rd, 2016

If [OPEN], I am accepting new requests. If [CLOSED], I am working on other things (check back later :twilightsmile:)

If you follow me, then you are likely aware of my ongoing review series. In order to mix things up a little, I am now taking requests for stories to review. Like everything in life, there are some caveats:
*Only request reviews for one of your own stories.

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Jan
25th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #37 — Sister Solstice · 11:39am Jan 25th, 2020

Sep
27th
2015

cleverpun's Concise Critiques · 9:20pm Sep 27th, 2015

I go into every story hoping for something that will be worth commenting on. Unfortunately, not everything warrants prolonged critiquing. This is especially true of fanfiction, where many writers are still learning and improving. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences or less. All of these stories were found via the featured or popular boxes. Unlinked stories are rated M and are extremely NSFW: they may be found via the author links.

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Feb
10th
2017

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #30 — Gnosis · 7:59am Feb 10th, 2017

Jan
18th
2016

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #2 · 11:15pm Jan 18th, 2016

I go into every story hoping for something that will be worth commenting at (great) length on. Unfortunately, not everything warrants prolonged critiquing. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences or less.

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Feb
12th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #22 — Changeling Courtship Rituals · 3:29am Feb 12th, 2016

Jun
26th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #28 — Indigo Hooves · 4:01am Jun 26th, 2016

Nov
13th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #13 — Why Don't You Tell Them? · 6:42am Nov 13th, 2015

May
5th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #26 — The Hays Code · 2:24am May 5th, 2016

Sep
8th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #8 — The Sun's Torment · 12:57am Sep 8th, 2015

Jan
27th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #19 — Old Friends · 10:12am Jan 27th, 2016

Jul
22nd
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #44 — The Rise Of Chaos · 10:24am Jul 22nd, 2020

We finally return to my series of critiques about the ISII entrants. We continue down my list of “finalists”: stories which I considered awarding points to. I would like to stress, however, that I only ranked them because FanOfMostEverything made me; they are all excellent.

I've suspected for a while that I would not be able to critique every story in the contest. At least not in long form. I suppose we'll cross that bridge when we get there.

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Dec
21st
2019

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #33 — Fang and Flame · 11:21pm Dec 21st, 2019

Jan
30th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #38 — Miles to Go · 7:49pm Jan 30th, 2020

Aug
30th
2018

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner Not-Fanfiction Edition — Magic: The Gathering's Unbowed, Part 1 · 5:38am Aug 30th, 2018

Yes, you read that right. Today I'm taking a break from talking about fanfiction and magic equines. Today, I'm talking about corporate fiction and magic humans! I know it will be a transition for all of us, but there's more equivalency in writing quality than you might expect.

Today I'm talking about Unbowed, Part 1.

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Apr
8th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #43 — The Heart Beats Still · 5:40am Apr 8th, 2020

I’m continuing my critiques of the entrants into the Imposing Sovereigns II contest. We continue down my list of “finalists”: stories which I considered awarding points to. I would like to stress, however, that I only ranked them because FanOfMostEverything made me; they are all excellent.

I must also point out, I never read the comic involving Princess Amore.

Title: The Heart Beats Still

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Mar
30th
2017

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #32 — La Da Dee (PMV) · 7:35am Mar 30th, 2017

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I have reviewed some things that don’t traditionally receive deep criticism. I’ve done full length reviews of porn and a webcomic, for instance. Today, we add a Pony Music Video (PMV) to that list.

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Jan
5th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #36 — Pony Peace is Dragon War (Diplomatic Dragon Noises Included) · 9:32am Jan 5th, 2020

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