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Aug
31st
2015

Review Series Idea · 6:10am Aug 31st, 2015

Okay, yes. Fair enough. I have made several of these blogs about blogging, and yet I haven't followed through on most of them. I will start my advice series just as soon as I get a buffer on my homework, which should happen this week. There's a lot going on lately, and long story short, it has been a very rough week.

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Oct
27th
2018

The Chilling Adventures of Sabrina · 3:41pm Oct 27th, 2018

Oct
28th
2018

Castlevania · 4:04am Oct 28th, 2018

Jul
10th
2016

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #6 · 6:48am Jul 10th, 2016

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

Cant by Rambling Writer:

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May
27th
2016

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #5 · 3:47am May 27th, 2016

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

Drop. by Unpopular Opinion Trixie:

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Jan
14th
2016

Four Year Anniversary Special: cleverpun's Critique Corner — If You Came to Conquer/Inexcusable · 9:06pm Jan 14th, 2016

Last year, to celebrate my three year anniversary on the site, I wrote a long, meandering blog post looking back on all the writing I had done. It was an interesting exercise, though its experimental nature perhaps limited its utility.

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Jan
29th
2016

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #3 · 11:39am Jan 29th, 2016

I go into every story hoping for something that will be worth commenting at (great) length on. Unfortunately, not everything warrants prolonged critiquing. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences or less.

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Mar
22nd
2017

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #31 — A Thousand Roses · 6:18am Mar 22nd, 2017

Feb
12th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #40 — Souls and Silicon · 2:58am Feb 12th, 2020

Jan
31st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #21 — The Quest by iisaw · 5:04pm Jan 31st, 2016

Jul
7th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #1 · 4:29pm Jul 7th, 2015

One thing I like about the FIM fanfic fandom is the abundance of reviewers and critique available. It helps authors grow, helps other authors learn from their mistakes, and helps inform readers of stories they may like or dislike.

I generally avoided being one of those reviewers for a long time. I usually preferred a direct dialogue with the author, so my critique would often take the form of a lengthy comment directly on the story in question.

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Mar
3rd
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #23 — If Memory Serves by Pascoite · 5:19am Mar 3rd, 2016

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Today’s story uses not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is fairly obvious (perhaps intentionally so), I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.


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Oct
30th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #11 — Bonafide · 4:57am Oct 30th, 2015

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Today’s critique is another “retro” one. It is an adaptation of a comment I already made, on a story I have already read, rather than completely new material based on a recent read.

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Mar
29th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #24 — It Feels... Wrong. · 12:13am Mar 29th, 2016

Nov
29th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #2 · 3:26am Nov 29th, 2015

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

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Aug
17th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #6 — To Be A Mule · 6:36am Aug 17th, 2015

Mar
17th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #42 — Seneschal · 11:08pm Mar 17th, 2020

Jul
14th
2015

CCC: Cleverpun's Critique Corner #2 · 10:53pm Jul 14th, 2015

For a breakdown of the format, don't forget to check the first entry.


Title: Of Angels
Author: PaulAsaran

Short summary: Angel Bunny learns to write from Twilight, for a reason that quickly becomes obvious. Told through letters/written conversations.

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Jul
28th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #4 — Sort of Panic Themed · 6:35pm Jul 28th, 2015

Sep
12th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #9 — Asylum · 6:31am Sep 12th, 2015

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For today’s critique, I thought I would try something different. Rather than reading a new story, I took a story I had previously “reviewed” (by leaving a comment on it), and then rework that comment into a proper critique.

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