Chapter 33:
I spruced up the descriptions some, and changed some wording. A lot of it sounded unclear and awkward so it should flow better now.

Chapter 34:
There were a decent amount of typos and I was rather shocked. They were all technically words, so it might explain why spellcheck didn't catch them. Same deal as before, some descriptions were kind of unclear, and I added in some extra imagery.

Eh, saw several annoying typos and a few places to spruce up the wording. Also there were some unclear actions I was able to tidy up, nothing too serious imo.

Like last month, the previous week's riff will need to be quietly removed from public viewing and you'll have a recap/highlight reel for next week. Them's the breaks.

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This was a longer and more difficult chapter. I spruced up the descriptions and general formatting. there was some stuff that I felt could have been described or worded better. At the end, I added in a character and put in a few more things with General Versa. I might add a bit more later, but for now I'm content with it.

Exactly what the title says! Chapter 40: Trial By Fire part 4

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If you haven't seen it already, then what are you waiting for?! Go on and read that and come back afterwards. I can wait.

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You back? Cool, lets get to it then.

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I just got word of the cast of the upcoming My Little Pony A New Generation, and I can not believe they have Sofia Carson! As you Little Pony Legend fans may recall, I picked Sofia Carson as the “voice” of Chrysalis in The Guardians of Harmony. Or at least, she would have been if I had the money… and if I owned MLP and LoK, but you get the idea. I can not believe Sofia is actually going to be part of the Pony family!

Did I predict the future?

Best typo in KOTD: "She grabs the back of his head and holds it still, as she drives a knee spike into his forehead. She shoves his dad bod away." Christ that's been in there this entire time

God I love writing action, but it can get so annoying. Do you know how hard it is to condense a scene to as few words as possible, while everything still keeps at an intense, clear pace?

I just found out that Discount Rates for HarmonyCon badges end tonight! If you wanted to go, make sure you register today!

HarmonyCon Website Here!!

I'll be at Harmony Con, running seminars, trolling, and hanging around all 3 days, so if y'all wanted to see me at a con, this would be the one to be at.

Grading Scale:

A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)

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What do MLP and Transformers have in common? Aside from being toy driven properties from Hasbro that is. Well take a listen to my little theory and maybe you'll see the two are more closely linked then we might have originally thought.

https://youtu.be/v3oTrh24dA4

I am a large follower of Tatsurou and his PWNY-verse stories. So much so, that I have on many occasions offered ideas and suggestions to him. A couple he accepted.

One idea, however, I offered for a small game I sometime play on his stories, and he took it further by incorporating the idea in one of his stories. Tricky bastard didn't even say anything, and I nearly completely missed it. But when I realized what he did, I was awed and a little touched.

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Sorry for going so silent there, guys. But, uh, a lot of stuff kinda came up, unfortunately.
Work, home life, mah own health...ya know, all that fun stuff.
But! Despite all that, this is a post of good news!
So, as most of ya might be aware, the Southern East Coast is getting pummeled by Hurricane Matthew.
And thus, Ah don't have work cause the weather is pretty gnarly.

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Okay guys, I've picked what I'm gonna do. I'm gonna have a question and answer session. Q+A if you will. You guys ask me questions that maybe you've wanted to ask me for a long time, and I will answer them. I do however have some rules when it comes to this.

1. Do not swear when you ask them.
2. Do not ask anything that's highly delicate, controversial, or insensitive.

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WARNING!!!

What follows after this paragraph are spoilers for chapter nine! I am posting this blog because I'm stuck and want some help from those who are willing to help. If you'd prefer to read the story only and not get early spoilers, then exit this blog post and wait for the next update.

You have been warned.

SBSBSB

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Discordant Harmony

Oh, no, an episode with Discord (In my view, the single most pathetic character in the entire franchise)

Oh well...

Well, I do approve of the lesson; It's important o be true to yourself, something I keep trying to tell people but the people still rudely scoff at me for it.

But Fluttershy seems to be acting teency bit out of character (She's not acting all meek and timid) but at least she gets the idea that EVERYONE IS DIFFERENT

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Would you look at that, I need to go back to school! You know what that means: less frequent updates! Oh joy! But seriously, I'm going back to school, so my stories will be updated less frequently. Schoolwork takes priority over writing fanfiction, unfortunately. But don't worry, I'm working on new chapters for my favorite stories, The First Pony to Time Travel Without a Spell and

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