Make Your Bed
By Willam H. Mcraven (Reviewed by B)
Wisdom. Advice. Motivation.
The three points of the book, though sometimes sounding like tidbits, are profound in their message and execution. Each chapter is a point, supported by a relevant story from the admiral's days as a Navy Seal, each concise in getting its theme across.
Which is good, because other than the following, I'm not having a very happy day. But enough of that- onto the goods.
Wanderlust hit 100 likes this morning. It's the first multi-chapter story I published on this site, and the first fanfic I started writing since I was 16. I'm now 34 and now I'm writing MLP fic, so there you have it.
[there was a gif here but I felt like it was going to give a seizure the more I looked at it.]
Thank you to all the lovely people who read it.
Hey guys! It's been a while, hasn't it? You guys doing good? I hope so. I just got back from a long, strenuous shift at the hotel. Boy oh boy, that one was something. Very tired, but staying strong.
(Reading (part 1) by Mic the Microphone)
(Reading (part 1) by slickdash)
This is stupid.
I'm literally in the middle of reading ROBCakeran's entry for the Outside Insight contest, and I realized, hey, is this the first of his stories I've reviewed since MLD?
And then I find out
The only thing that gets me more excited than MLP is a new Tech N9ne album!
I downloaded the deluxe edition of "Strangeulation vol II" last night and listened to the entire thing; let me tell ya'; it is absolutely amazing!
Grading Scale:
A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)
After a week-long hiatus, I'm suddenly doing all the things. (I could potentially post one more journal today!) Today's review post is brought to you by not one, but two readings, by DrWolf001 and Indubitably Ponified. (Points to the latter for the ensemble cast and actually reading out the acronym.) (Here's another one by
Rating Scale:
12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film
Rating Scale:
12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film
10/10—the standard rating; awesome film with a couple of flaws
9/10—a wonderful film with several flaws
Rating Scale:
12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film
10/10—the standard rating; awesome film with a couple of flaws
9/10—a wonderful film with several flaws
8/10–a great film with numerous flaws but not enough to ruin it
Rating Scale:
12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film
10/10—the standard rating; awesome film with a couple of flaws
9/10—a wonderful film with several flaws
8/10–a great film with numerous flaws but not enough to ruin it
insert wise comment here, preferably an aesop
You know, when Displaced stories are done right, they really do a good job. When they're done wrong... Well, quite a few of us have seen the results. Sadly, today's fic is of the latter variety of Displaced fics. Whoop dee fucking do. And as it concerns my favorite Autobot, Optimus Prime himself, makes me even more annoyed. I'll try to remain unbiased, but if I want to tear my own hair out at the end of this... Sucks in breath You won't blame me... right?
Okay, so back to reviewing. First off, an update though. One of the previous fics I reviewed, Reconciliation by xd77, the author of said story deleted negative comments against the story, so congrats. You just earned yourself an even lower score! 3/10 now. But anyways, to the main review at hand, and I'm happy to say that this story will be scoring much higher.
The story in question?
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