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I have waited many moons for this. Today is a good day.
I'm 99% sure I picked up on this in editing.
It should be spent, with a t, not spend with a d
*puts on horse mask* I love it! (If anyone gets this refference good for you)
Yep, finding this story pretty interesting so far! I haven't read that many FoE stories yet but this sure does have an interesting perspective so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)
6579855 Awesome! Thanks!^^
Ah, I belive he might be developing an immunity to your "spellbane".
Also, being a fellow doctor it is likely he has dealt with such formulas and has made a counter to it.
You wouldn't believe where that stuff comes from...if we are talking about Fallout Horizons origins.
I'm unsure if this story has a different method of making Hydra.
By golly, somepony finally called her out on her psychopathy...too bad that kind of talk doesn't work on psychopaths.
anyway, I've also formulated a theory on these "imagined" conversations actually taking place in her mind, as opposed to her really just being that far lost.
Ewww! A PH reference in my else so nice chapter! Why does it have to peek its ugly head inside so many stories! Nurse, we need the strongest disinfectant on hand to clean this mess up!
And nice to see things moving along, looking forward to see the next area that our healing Angel are gonna visit.
Nitpicks:
" his eyes bulged while he tried to catch breath as my spell stopped his heart from beating." I am no master of anatomy... but why should he be breathless with his heart stopping?
"Pots with drugs on turned off hot plates," you are lacking a listing comma here
"My eyes grow wide." grew?
"I sit down on Cutter’s chest and continued to talk to my PipBuck." sat
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Well, PH is my most favorite work of fiction, so... :p
Abnormal or absent of breathing is one of the sympthoms of cardiac arrest, actually, along with loss of conciousness. Hm. Kiiinda wish right now that I had made Cutter pass out, so that Angl would have to roll her eyes and cancel her spell, then start again
Thanks for pointing those out^^
Is that a reference to Anywhere but Here?
Great story so far, by the way
Oh so that’s how those mines got there I almost got blown up by them several times