FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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Okay, reunited with the team... now... and now i imagine, the problem that Fast&CO will have if he becomes an Alicorn :
Glitter : ...A cold huh ?
Fast (with his wing) : Huh... yeah. A special cold, some sort of... supercold ?
Glitter : Uhuh.
Fast : yeah, a super cold that gave me super power !
Glitter : Dad, you lie as good as you barter.
Fast (flinching) : ...Twisting the knife much ?
I'm laughing already.
Now, for the mutation... i see only the complete alicornification as a good outcome... Because a miracle remedy a the last second would be, with the elements we got this chapter, going into bullshit class deus ex machine IMO... well i can see another good outcome, still a bit deus ex machiney, but still in the realm : the final TF almost failing, but the mini-Unity formed by the Trinity Alicorns stabilizing Fast, because of the elements given there : the goddess was shaping all all alicorns via unity. Maybe the mini-unity can if not completely reshape him, at least run damage control, to avoid his body and mind to be destroyed.
Also, Jade don't want that Umbra know about the IMP yet... but with Fast's limited mental connection, and his slip under Ivy scrutiny... She may be already aware... that's why i think the solution mentioned higher is viable in my opinion.
But you know what ? Don't let my hypothesis and opinions alter what you have planed. Maybe you have some idea that will save fast without going into bullshit levels of deux ex machinas, blowing literally all of our feeble readers minds... godspeed author.
I have been tied down to the tracks of this stories hype train and been run over by it multiple times.
I LOVE IT!!!
Calling it: Fast will open the MoM facility and it will have a Pinkie Pie future sight message that opens a room with a cure or details how to cure him. The only other alternatives I see are Mobius (because we know jackshit about Mobius and the other think tank members are surprised that he's doing things again) or the Railroad curing him.
Oh ho ho, you have NO idea
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Why are all your comments green? Every time I see you comment on a story the text is always green!
Ante up.
Also, been rereading this and for some reason, I'd forgotten Fast was a dark grey color. I honestly started thinking that since he was injected with the Institute IMP that his coloration changed to pure white. Pretty sure the only reason I didn't think his eyes became blue is because every so often it mentions they're red.
5th time im reading this story
Hope everyone else is as forgiving as Fast with Zed or at least less wrathful/punishing than the Tree of Harmony
I mean DAMN! That tree didn't mess around with the mean six
I wonder, does that perk stack so that for every member that drops below 30% health, the resistance to damage increases? Or is it just a one time thing?
I’m surprised that with all the implied sex scenes between Fast and Jade, why haven’t people made any clop art of these two lovebirds yet.
I really wish I could read more, but my iPad is very close to 20% and I want to charge it.
I know exactly what’s going to happen, unfortunately, I’ve been spoiled by the cover art. I’m fairly certain he’ll become an alicorn, if nothing else because I’m fairly certain that the Shrouded Stallion costume doesn’t come with wings.
Eep!
This line . . . THIS FUCKING LINE. It just hits in a way you don't think possible
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Seeing as collectively there is only 6 fan art floating around of this story, I would say its not as popular as the original or Project Horizons.