"How can an idea be great if it remains locked in ones mind?"
Reik, a pony that's been at the top and bottom of the social ladder, has created a new system of society and government. Despite being forced into exile he is ready to wage revolution against Celestia. But sometimes it is all to easy to lose sight of what's right and wrong, and will his revolution really be one of peace or is it all just a veil for revenge?

A battle-scarred (human) warrior, in his quest to find inner peace finds himself in Equestria. Now, in the most peaceful realm in existence, how will he keep his human weaknesses from tainting these kind ponies.

This is my first story EVER. And in all honesty its probably awful, feel free to leave painfully honest comments.Also im not entirely sure how to do this whole process so if i do anything wrong please help me.Thank you friends!