Jul
30th
2012
Past Sins rewrite in final cleanup · 4:52am Jul 30th, 2012
Revisions are done
Primary Editing pass is done
Editors & Batty are cleaning up some last little bits here and there.
In all, Past Sins is very close to coming to FimFiction.net and being fit to print, which is thankful since I did promise it would be done by the end of the month.
So, I will admit, it may take another week or so for the final spit and polish to be applied, but the story is so very, very close, and I appreciate everyone's patience.
Also, I am happy to say that I haven't just been editing. I've got not one but two stories I'll be posting up in the coming weeks. One's basically ready, the other is waiting for cover art.
So I hope everyone enjoys whats soon to come.
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Never read Past Sins. Should be interesting.
YAAAAAAAAAAAY :D
Ladies and Gentlemen/colts... let there be dancing in the streets, and rejoicing in the halls of the entire country, neigh, the entire continent!
It is almost here.
Can't wait dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png ... oh wait, I have to dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png
W00T! I'm looking forward to the revisions to 'Past Sins'!
Also, I've been very active on the interactive 'sequel' to this story on Writing.com. Have you seen it yet? It's called Nyx - The Teen Years.
Cool, can't wait to see it here. One of my all time favorites.
I read 'Past Sins' off of EQD awhile back and listened to some of the music made for it. I have to say that it is one, if not the best fic I've read! I've waited this long another week won't hurt me!
Yay, finally it will be hosted in this amazing site!
258514 BLASPHEMY dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
our celebrations will be heard from asgard!
AWESOME! Considering I promised to buy the book, glad to know it's almost done! xD KINDA wish I could have helped more, but as you know, I just don't have enough experience/bring enough to the table to be of any real help... Oh well! Can't wait to read it again! I STILL remember when I stayed up til 4 in the morning the day of a test/final to read the new chapters you sent me to proof. XD And I'm rambling again...
Shutting up! Love that it's almost done, and looking VERY forward to it! :3
yes yes yes yes yes!!!
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This is literally THE fic that got me reading fan fiction in general, and finally convinced me to watch MLP. Really interested in how you're going to update it.
Wow, I didn't know a human could go Super Saiyan... but I just did so... and it was through a pomf-like overload of pure joy instead of being "awakened by fury". Congrats, Pen Stroke, you broke reality threefold and are all the more awesome for it.
Yeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh. Bring it on!
I hope the fic get the rating it earns. Can't wait.
258514 Believe me, it's one of the best, if not THE BEST fic ever written!
I am excite!
Exelent! Just as forseen and perfect for my masterplan HUEHUEHUEHUE.
But realy If I had not have my tea right now ,I might have bitten away a part of my monitor because:
"Finaly the moment has arived..."
Alright the best alicorn-as-protagonist fic is almost here!
I have only read the MST of the origlinal 13 first chapters. I can't wait to read the story. The one thing I don't like is that I will need to start over again thanks to changed chapters.
But this will be awesome! Hope I don't forget about it in my enormus pile of have to read fan-fictions.
insert fan girl sgeal (geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...........
May the halls of Sovngarde be flooded with mead and joy!
Akatosh himself shall know, that in one week, PAST SINS IS COMING TO FIMFICTION!
OORAH
It's really good news 'cos I was thinking I should reid it again.
Finally the moment will arrive for ME to read on fimfiction!
Wah-Hoo! (Oh, great, now I want to find a Klanoa/Nights crossover. Maybe later.)
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
Hope you corrected. The time in chapter 1 I shall explain. Twilight leaves at 3 gets nyx and comes back around 6 the bath and bandaging takes about a half an hour so 6:30 it took twilight 2 hours to Convince spike not to send a letter to the princess so 8:30 and nyx cried for an hour and a half. That ends at 10 not 9 check your math but other wise FUCKING AWESOME STORY. I WANT A SEQUEL
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Huh... well, would you look at that. Your right.
Mathematical
It will be fixed.
Thank you
wait was I the first person to notice that
Great, a reason to read it a sixth time
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You were the first person to notice it and tell me about it.
That's awesome I guess listening to it on youtube countless times was a good thing and I think there was another error in the first chapter when twilight gets out of the bath but it might of been a reading error. Ill have to read it again. But it went something like this. Twilight out of the bath and dried herself off. Twilight got out of the bath and drained the water. I'm not sure if its an error so if you could just reread that part.
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What's wrong with you?
Read it when it is released, please. And I'm going to read it for a second time. Also, how can we "get physical prints" of this?
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This is the pledgebank page where you can sign up to say you want to buy a copy. Ignore the deadline date because pledgebank always wants a deadline date and the real deadline is still tentative.
http://www.en-gb.pledgebank.com/PastSinsPrintFB2
Past Sins was one of the first, and of cource one of the best, fics I've read so far. Great story, almost can't wait to read the rewrite!