Restart · 4:25am Apr 18th, 2014
Well, as many of you know... the beginning of the story is somewhat lacking in the 'everything' department.
So, I have come to the amazing conclusion, that i should rewrite the entire story!
Woo!
Yeah!
OMG!
He's so moderate looking!
Thank you all.
Now, what this means, is that I'm going to be redoing the poor structure of my first 100 chapters, fixing as many grammatical errors as I can find, filling plot holes, adding scenes, and enhancing the overall -ness of the story.
Among those things, the beginning will be largely rewritten.
Off the Record will be written alongside the rewrite, so it's not like my stuff is gonna stop being updated. But, if you feel like restarting the whole thing, this might be good for you! Because I promise that this new version of the story will be of MUCH higher quality.
So, yeah. Things are gonna get much much much better, and hopefully i can get it on EQD or something. That would be pretty nice. But i'm not THAT good i don't think. Not yet.
WAT WAT WAT WAT WAT ... ok go ahead. Look forward to it.
Well it's a good thing I'm behind several hundred chapters, huh...
great, just great. now i have a totally valid reason to read all of the story again. thanks hearts. thanks for making me suffer through reading amazing fiction.
100 chapters.
Fuck that shit.
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2020488 Same.
Wow, and I literally just read through the whole thing to get to Lament.
...
Of course, I'll read it for a seventh time.
2020488
Man, i still need to read that stuff of yours. AND I WILL. I'm no jerk! You've been a pretty huge help to this story man. I gotta find that time.
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Lol, the funny thing is that I am a hundred chapters behind but I am one of the first original readers for this story, hell, I read most of it when it was on FanFiction.net... XD
2020525
You were like, reader #4.
2020523
Lol, hey ,take your time.
Truth be told, despite how helpful and loyal I was as a reader I am still several hundred chapters behind on YOUR story so I feel like a total dick... :(
Sorry about that.
And reader number number 4? Hot damn I guess that does mean something! XD
I'm surprised you knew that.
wait.....wat?oh well do whatever you think is good
2020525 I've been here for a while too. Though nowhere near as long as you. Still, I'm sorely behind on this story. Probly because I don't want to continue reading without first reading OTR: Return first, and I can never find it in me to open it up and start.
2020564
Lol, college and computer games have been the bane of my existence, though I know neither are a valid excuse. XD
Chapter 86 still has no title you should do that when you get to rewriting it. It just feels so bare. Or maybe that is the title.
2020653
Na, that's the chapter name, as to not give away what it's about.
Agh! I didn't think you were serious! Now I have to go back and read that while waiting for Hope and Shadows to update... Oh well, there are worse things to read.
Like Twilight, which is why I am not on very good terms with Alex for liking that saga.
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Well, the whole thing will be added to often, and i hope to add enough new content that it's well worth the reread. Like, i wanna have a bit more anger between Dash and Alex at the beginning, so that the get together can be a little more intense. That's just one thing though.
Stick around kiddo.
Well I guess this gives me an excuse to read those 4 30,000 plus side stories that I neglected.
DON'T DO IT!
I tried to do it...
Now I've been driven mad...
Just believe me, you don't want to try and rewrite it...
are you going to rewrite the side stories also?
Damn... one has to be masochistic to want to read the story for at least a second time. But for the sake of the tropes, I will do it.
Will the side arcs be revised as well?
Keep up the awesome work. I can't wait to see what the future has for Alex.
Personally, I think the whole "Chasing the Rainbow" spin-off went a little bit too fast with the pacing, so if you're planning on re-doing those too, that would be one a definitely recommend adding to.
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Side arcs will be redone, I agree that the pacing needs work in a lot of places, and that they can generally be improved.
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And as for the entire re-write, it's more along the lines of copy-paste, and rework the paragraphs that i think need to be reworked. I'm not rewriting almost a half a million words. I would go insane if that were the case.
I think that Haven Station was amazing as it is, though. I'm kinda disappointed that Dax didn't become a separate entity altogether, instead merging with Alex in his mind, but it works out either way, although there would be more comedic effect with the former. What I'm trying to say is for Haven Station, either don't change it very much, or change it a LOT. I don't see a "bit here, bit there" for that spin-off, it was great, so it's a really good "all or nothing" right there.
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Cool. Looking forward to it.
can't remember the beginning, I have a few stories about an alicorn oc following the fim timeline...
Better question, when did I favourite this story? I think it was a long time ago when it was during the first 5 chapters or so...
PS you're one of the people who inspired me to write, thanks
Edit: Knighty should add a feature for using "Folders" for stories made by authors so if they make a series, they can click on/add to the folders. Man, I'm smart, can't believe that someone didn;t think of this before.
*idea made by Hypersonic, Saturday April 19 2014 approx 12:34 AM Copyright, 2014-2100*
(I obviously have almost 0 knowledge of copyright)
Well done Hyper, I should reward myself... I know, Japanese Pony
(sometimes I accidently say po** instaid of pony)
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You posted this blog literally the day after i finally finished re-reading the entire story, now i must reread it again for the... 4th time...
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Dont worry just yet. Its going to be a little bit before I get the first few out. Story elements are changing, and I need to make sure it all flows. Plus, I think certain chapters will be skipped all together for the sake of length and time.
So it's sort of like a reboot...
The Amazing Off The Record. Bam, there's your title.