1234525 No, It's not your writing or English. It's how the plot works. At that point, with all those guns laying around, at least ONE pony would of died. Im sorry for being a dick. Honestly, your grammar and English is better than a lot of other writers here.
Comment posted by Vipershield41 deleted Jun 24th, 2014
Man im sorry, please don't leave! Fuck, I feel like a dick now...
Oh shit. You took down all your stories. Ummm, dude, don't delete them. You just need to work on it a little more. Im sorry.
1234525 No, It's not your writing or English. It's how the plot works. At that point, with all those guns laying around, at least ONE pony would of died. Im sorry for being a dick. Honestly, your grammar and English is better than a lot of other writers here.