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Oct
28th
2015

Why Crossovers are Bad · 1:17am Oct 28th, 2015

Generalizations are a dangerous thing. They often have exceptions, and require subjective judgements to make. The subject of today’s opinion piece, however, is a generalization that I believe in.

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Oct
17th
2015

I'm Done Writing Fanfiction Stories · 4:58am Oct 17th, 2015

Hello, everyone,

Today, I am here to say that I’ve written enough MLP fanfiction. Almost four years ago, I began writing fanfic with the intent of polishing my writing skills, of learning and improving and refining my craft.

I am happy to say that I was successful in that goal. I have learned so much in my time here, and I like to think that I helped pass on some of what I learned to others.

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Sep
28th
2015

Speculation and Worldbuilding: Pony Cultural Foods · 12:26am Sep 28th, 2015

For today’s worldbuilding exercise, let’s look at something that is at once universal and distinctive. Everyone eats food. At the same time, eating unfamiliar food can be a very alien experience. Food is a big part of cultural and geographic identity. Real life cuisine has countless gradations and variations. The ingredients and resources available give each real life culture a distinct history and evolution.

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Sep
27th
2015

cleverpun's Concise Critiques · 9:20pm Sep 27th, 2015

I go into every story hoping for something that will be worth commenting on. Unfortunately, not everything warrants prolonged critiquing. This is especially true of fanfiction, where many writers are still learning and improving. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences or less. All of these stories were found via the featured or popular boxes. Unlinked stories are rated M and are extremely NSFW: they may be found via the author links.

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Sep
22nd
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #10 — Red Apples · 1:06am Sep 22nd, 2015

Sep
19th
2015

On Writing Children Characters · 12:19am Sep 19th, 2015

For a change of pace, today’s blog post is about something which I actually know about, rather than a fusillade of meandering speculation. I have an Associates of Science in Early Childhood Development, and am currently employed as a preschool teacher. In the interest of clarity and utility, I tried to limit the amount of specialized knowledge in this post. If anyone wants specialized knowledge from my field, then clarifications or questions are welcome in the comments, as always.

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Sep
14th
2015

Continuation versus Conclusion; The Dichotomy of Story Structure · 7:12am Sep 14th, 2015

The more fiction I consume, the more I notice patterns. Pigeonholing subjective art is never going to be perfectly accurate, but there are generalizations that have some truth. Today, I’d like to talk about a pattern that is present in all fiction, but is more noticeable and more identifiable in fanfiction.

Broadly speaking, fiction can be divided into two types; those that are designed to conclude, and those that are designed to continue for as long as possible.

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Sep
12th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #9 — Asylum · 6:31am Sep 12th, 2015

Review Index

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For today’s critique, I thought I would try something different. Rather than reading a new story, I took a story I had previously “reviewed” (by leaving a comment on it), and then rework that comment into a proper critique.

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Sep
8th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #8 — The Sun's Torment · 12:57am Sep 8th, 2015

Sep
2nd
2015

Prereader/Editor Request: The Unfortunate Case of Doctor Luna and Mistress Moon · 5:41am Sep 2nd, 2015

Today, I thought I'd try something a little different.

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