And to think I didn't even give your story a chance (before you released chapter 5). I kind of regret that, looking back on my decision. This story is quite well written and has lots of sad feelings
Finally, new chapter.... aaaaaand he forgives Luna already. Oh well. At least he's holding on to his grudge with the rest of them.Of course Applejack wouldn't want for them to go search for him, she's the one who called him a monster! So now Celestia sees him as a threat, I doubt she would just sit by and allow it to exist, maybe she sends out her Royal Guard to apprehend him...
I like this story and will wait patiently for the update. Although so far it doesn't warrant the "Mature" rating, but for now I'm going to guess there's going to be a sex scene in the far future.
And to think I didn't even give your story a chance (before you released chapter 5). I kind of regret that, looking back on my decision.
This story is quite well written and has lots of sad feelings
Finally, new chapter.... aaaaaand he forgives Luna already. Oh well. At least he's holding on to his grudge with the rest of them.Of course Applejack wouldn't want for them to go search for him, she's the one who called him a monster! So now Celestia sees him as a threat, I doubt she would just sit by and allow it to exist, maybe she sends out her Royal Guard to apprehend him...
It was a very nice and moving chapter!
great chapter!
but i think it's time to update the list that shows which ponies are in it
very good chapter.
nice chapter dude
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2759910 Okay yeah I get it, but still
I like this story and will wait patiently for the update. Although so far it doesn't warrant the "Mature" rating, but for now I'm going to guess there's going to be a sex scene in the far future.
2809161 You should've read father on where him and the ponies get in a little "disagreement" but oh well, suit yourself.
I don't see the mystery in the Soarin' and Rainbow Dash thing. It's kinda obvious.
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Yeah, I don't particularly care about Soarin. He's an asshole and no one likes him; the end.
Anyway, I'm really enjoying the interactions between Geoffbert and Lunabert.
Dillbert, Dogbert, Catbert, etc.
I'm retarded.