R.I.P. Trees.

Pretty good chapter, keen to see where this story is headed. My only peeve is the copious amounts (to me) of song lyrics, never did like them in stories, never will since they serve little purpose except as filler. Also, why was half the chapter in italics?

ugt and last 2 chapters were so good :(

If there was one single reason for liking this story, it would be for the rapid updates, keep them up!

At least the trees went to heaven or my version of it

Fluttershy is his therapist. Lyra is his local anoyance agency about questions and stuff. And Celestia will be the one he confides in alot (Luna probably to) and probably starts a relation with.

Well considering there is no romance tag just keep it at the mature stuff that will happen.

"Don't expect me to update this lots..." -Author

Updates three times in a week...

YOU LIED TO ME!

Sir, you are like a boat. Haha! Get it? Because shipping..... and..... yea... haha.........

I need to get some friends.

2485370 calm your tits and let the luls calm you.

And that man giving us bi- poler people justice! Trees thay died for the good of the world.

Sigh... I don't like how fast the main character just seemed to breeze through everything in this chapter.
The characters seem a bit to go-with-the-flow in regards to Geoff's actions and behavior. And because of
that, the moments that are supposed to be funny along with a few other things kind of fall flat for me. Also... The
scene regarding his porn magazines just doesn't seem realistic at all to me... I can't imagine the characters all
reacting like a bunch of 10 year olds in regards to something that is so very natural for just about any living creature.
Especially Luna and Celestia who have been alive for thousands of years.

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Can lyrics be considered filler with <300 words in a 10k word chapter?

2486275 lol Like I said, it's a pet peeve of mine, using lyrics, I just find it disrupts the flow of the chapter. The only part of it I liked was when he was singing about Luna, it was short and to the point.

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Ah, I see. That makes much more sense, and I'll keep it in mind for future chapters.

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But that's it though. They don't know how to react, so they have to go with it. As for the magazines, everything about that goes against the idea of 'nobility,' if you see what I'm saying. Geoff's mind is erratic, damaged, and if you look at it, the elements mainly stayed sitting in a corner all night, cept for fluttershy. Fluttershy's awesome.

Kind of confused, why is most of the chapter in italics, is it a memory or something?

[...]I was suddenly offended that there had been horses kept in corrals. I shook my head, recalling that they weren't sentient back home, and that was the only way to keep them domesticated.

Sentient? Actually, yes they were. They could feel after all.
What they weren't is sapient. There's a difference there, brony.

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Memories/dreams/cutaways from Geoffs pov will mostly be in italics, I'll double check to see if I screwed up with the formatting though.

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Dat vocabulary. . .

I'll just go fix that shall I?

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So I checked, and I screwed up the formatting for the italics. Thanks for saying something

2486728 Just saying, dude. Most people don't realize the difference between the two.
You just gotta remember to avoid the word that sounds like 'sense' when you want to talk about thinking! It's easy

2486758 No problem, just keep uploading more chapters!

you little shit. You've updated this story 3 times in 1 week, SO I expect your next update to be on AC: Failure, or so help me god I will rip your nuts off and shove them down Fluttershy's throat. (100% serious)

This chapter is so freaking amazing, I love it this many.

69 / 69

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No more updates

Ever

For any story.

for srs.

What the fuck...?
More...

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he tries to stay sane,but in the apocalypse(well,more like after it...),those who try to keep their sanity always lose theirs....

She was still laying on the couch.

lying

Fancy pants tag 'cause I had an idea. . .

The shower was a bit short, but even having to crouch down couldn't bug me right now. After showering for about 20 minutes

THAT IS NOT A SHORT SHOWER!

2609170 *sigh* no he mean the tangible shower was short because its meant for poni... you know what never mind.

Can I fuck them?

*Warning, containment on the laughs unit has failed.*

When Luna burned the truck and guns magazines, well... that's where I would do a flying tackle. Burn the porn, but not the trucks and guns!

Oh, its one of THOSE stories. The generic ones where the main character is a bad ass but is lovey dovey with the ponies. I mean don't get me wrong, this is still good writing. But this had potential! I mean the first two chapters were amazing, but you squandered it man! I mean, if he is such a hard ass before visiting Equestria, why is he a free bird when he is in Equestria?! This story had potential to be a very good HiE, but it was turned into an average story.
5/10 it was okay

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Lets see if he kicks Bluebloods ass at the Gala.

There's so many things I like about this chapter. I liked Luna, and the mass embarrassment scene was great .

2484966 NEVAR FORGET

" Luna won't you cry for me? I'm as lonely as I've ever been, I am forced back into the start, is there any way to fix a broken heart? "

Ruh roh