Although, I'm hesitant to give it any critique and I say this because we don't know what he's bringing with him to Equestria. Not in the physical object-sense, like his rifle or a Meal that's Rarely Edible, but what him as a character is bringing.
I mean, is he gonna be sad and gloomy that in his attempt to escape life he was thrown back into it (albiet in an assumedly different world), or is he going to be balls-to-the-walls excited that he has "people" to talk to again?
We'll have to want for Fakky to make his next move.
Oh, and despite all that, I did rather enjoy it; very-well written.
I'll keep an eye on this. My interest is certainly piqued.
So thanks for that.
Hmmm. Interesting.
Although, I'm hesitant to give it any critique and I say this because we don't know what he's bringing with him to Equestria. Not in the physical object-sense, like his rifle or a Meal that's Rarely Edible, but what him as a character is bringing.
I mean, is he gonna be sad and gloomy that in his attempt to escape life he was thrown back into it (albiet in an assumedly different world), or is he going to be balls-to-the-walls excited that he has "people" to talk to again?
We'll have to want for Fakky to make his next move.
Oh, and despite all that, I did rather enjoy it; very-well written.
Amazingly well made, Geoff's fight for survival felt so... REAL that I felt as if I was in the story myself.
Ten outta Ten ( so far )
im back and vaery good