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...... THAT WAS FLIPPING AWESOME! seriously I love a good bit of fighting, but from a story about a KIDS show!?
Now that was incredible! Much better than I anticipated.
And Luna giving Dusk that kiss was just so cute! And I especially loved how it looked like everypony present got jealous!
Looking forward eagerly to more!
As good as this story is, it takes a bit away that you basically stole the best scenes from other shows.
Also... Did you have to go all voltron?
2624866 the fuck is voltron?
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An ancient cartoon best forgotten - at the end of every episode it pulls out a "blazing sword" upon which the enemy invariably turns to dust in a suitably violent manner.
Your description matched so perfectly that I cannot see anything else.
Love it!
well that was unexpected
wait if Shining Armor is mare then the marriage will be a mare+mare
well lets wait and see
One yesterday
TWO today!?
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But I can't play jazz
Also, whenever you use the word "I", in which the single letter is alone, you always capitalize it. Keep calm and schreib auf.
Luna kissing dusk, i guessing she won the poll then?
I am expecting Cadence to have some feelings for Dusk, and with Celestia being disappointed that he didn't have wet dreams about her; I think Dusk can have ALL the princesses. I want to see how he will deal with Iron Will!
2627747 Screaming like a balla!
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Well, that might come later, but if it was done now instead of later (if ever) the author would be drawing the wrong kind of attention too early and would be getting constant nagging for more clop rather than story.
Luna gets all the love. Poor Celestia.
That was the most incoherent, worst plotted and most deus ex machina moments seen chapter ever.
In other words just your usual Shounen fighter manga chapter.
So i guess mission complet?
I dunno, this chapter was a lackluster to me. Way too much which was done and said felt like bullshiting as there was no real reasoning or build up between any of what was said or done.
Then again the star burst goatee and Luna kiss made it almost bearable. But only almost.
2627168 oh god i hope so.
still kinda hope the queen of the changlings gets a piece of the action
2642025 You're that far behind?
2642039 Yes, that would be more... appropriate.
berry nice ending you have there
although I find it odd that the rest of the girls didn't react to Luna kissing dusk ehehhe
once i'm full on art-sy feelings and will to draw I MIGHT draw some scenes
(especially the scene where dusk appeared out of magical aura of badassery with nothing but his black slacks and bare chest with an X)
cheers for future chapters
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eheh... I only got to read this again today (or tonight in my country)
:D
This was a very interesting take on The Nightmare Moon episodes. And you are going to do original stories after 'The Wedding?' I guess those will be when the Mature rating comes into play?
Oh thank goodness!~ I was about to drop this story like a base if Luna died!
Nice story, the fight scenes are a little too OP. Feels like I'm watching DBZ.
Dang! This is GOOD! I can only hope you've got a plan for Equestria Girls in the works. Imagine, an epic fight between a demon and a humanoid fire elemental.
The power of regret
MC as a tsundere....interesting.