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yes it was me my good sir :3
and I'll get to making another one which fits the "grouchy, messy, anti social" look :3
-if ye want, tell me some details that would help me picture him
im liking this
Moar
Sounds nice, funny to see what happens as everyone in Twilight Sparkle's family (Spike included) is gender bent, as opposed to just Twilight. It'll be interesting to see what happens with the disgruntled Dusk Shine that probably plays out more darker in nature than TULLOD. In some cases, it would be more realistic portrayal as the original Twilight Sparkle doesn't like the new ponies at the beginning and even after making friends she is content to her studies all the time, which would compliment well with your Dusk Shine character as he would (regardless if he accepts having friends or not) be continuing his studies in the Library all the time as he would in Canterlot.
Overall, it'll be interesting to see how this story develops overtime. As for the artwork that is provided, it'll be a nice bonus to introduce the cast with drawings, should the artwork be constant to one artist when he/she has the time available to draw. Would be nice as well to post the artwork in the Author's Notes, rather than have it on a separate chapter, as it would give a bad impression to your readers. Just something to mind of, anyhow, keep up the good work mate
But one question:
Would that be more of Trixie's character rather than Blueblood, as boasting towards himself/herself is more of her trait? Would Bluebood be more like the silent Trixie who expects everything to be handle him in the silver platter, as opposed to being clamorous?
Then again, it'll be interesting to see what kind of insults and remarks Dusk Shine would make towards Trixie when she gets involved.
Please continue.
Neat!
Anthro dusk.
So hot.
2931160 0.O OH SNAP YOUR OUT OF THE STORY
I don't see anything.
HAH! I'm a wee bit beefier than Dusk Shine here! And people call Me skinny.