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Hm, Dusk seems to be less of an asshole, not sure if this is a good thing or a bad thing. Great chapter anyhow.
whats with the eye colour change eh? looks like theres more than just dusk in his head
2729360 Let's cross that bridge when we come to it.
Two chapters in a day? Someone's on a roll.
2729367 Someone's keeping me from writing a third, lol.
Split Personality Disorder?
2729436 Not sure yet. It was just meant to symbolise his desires, but I'm seriously considering it.
I don't know what to say asides from ok 2 chapters in one day what is this black magic
well this was....different
and completely unexpected
but ohhh do I love it soooo
2729473 I challenge you to draw the kinky shit. lol. Might go up on Rule 34.
2729470 What you say: what is this black magic?
What I think you say: i28.photobucket.com/albums/c226/saxcsa/Wizard.png
2729479 Oh shit son, never actually drew any porn... ever
butt! hehe
I am tempted to draw several scenes from this chapter (yes, including the kinky stuff)
but that is to come after I draw (or at least do line art on the cover image) aaand when my schedule clears up :P college and all that
all in all, I loved the chapter and I lol'ed when he said "If you're lucky, I'll give you the horn." hahahaha
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It would be pretty cool, cause you don't know which dusk is which. If there is SPD, you gotta have a rage one....
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pamsletsgetdowntobusiness.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/horn8001.jpg
:o)
2729502 I'm seriously considering a hulk effect. One personality is Dusk, the other is pure rage and uncontrollable.
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rainbowdash.net/file/pony-20130516T060912-hkv8s4k.gif
2729514 da gif no work D:
2729520 try right clicking and opening the image in another tab.
2728719 fuck i go out for 4 hours and an UPDATE>!?!
you deserve this
2729543 Damn straight!
Oh how I love this story, but I still want to know more about how he got that scar on his chest and who or what caused it.
He's gonna fuck 'em all! Lucky bastard!
2729577 oh my god, I suddenly thought about Trixie and Barb
double teaming Dusk
like say :
Trixie and Barb have been going at it in future chapters
but The great and horny Trixie still kinda has a thing for Dusk
so she convinces Barb to have a change of pace and both of them get the Shine's D
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My god. That is gruesome! For Dusk, I mean.
2729641 but hey,
he magically produced another set of arms
and made his tail into another dick,
so who say's he wouldn't be able to 'conquer' those two as well XD
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Trixie: Oh, I do hope you'll be gentle, Dusk. Barb and I are so afraid of being raped by you.
Dusk: For the love of Celestia, Trixie, nopony wants to rape you!
Trixie: What a horrible thing to say.
Im sorry, but I can't get Vicious out of my head.
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I got 403 Forbidden pm the gif.
As for the chapter itself, was not expecting either the pairing or the Mature-Sex tag to come into play so quickly. However, I like it.
Dusk doesn't seem SPD to me. More...segmented. Like he's turned off most of his emotions due to some traumatic event from his past, and interacting with the other Harmony Bearers is slowly turning them back on. It seems less like a different self or character growth and more like...a rediscovery.
Hmm...you could take this in a very different direction from canon there. Dusk used to be open and friendly with everyone, but the event of his Entrance exam was far more dramatic than Twilight's, possibly costing someone their life, and probably the cause of that first scar. Dusk blamed himself, and shut down for a time. The only emotion that still pushed him forward was anger, which he directed first inward, and then outward to get himself moving, turning all the others off - not through psychology, but magic, literally sealing away his capacity to feel the other emotions, a state that the Elements of Harmony are working to reverse by strengthening his bond to the other bearers.
Edit: a point about the sex, though.
I'm pretty sure you mean hymen here.
2729730 No, it's cervix. And you've given me a great idea regarding his scar.
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Dusk: what a bothersome day, I need a rest
Trixie: Well master why not have a sit beside me, just relax and don't mind your great and powerful apprentice.
Dusk shrugs and doesn't bother with berating or antagonizing Trixie, and complies to go and sit on his favorite chair with her just a little bit to his left. He sits down and rests his head back on his comfortable sofa chair. He suddenly notices something on his thigh.
Dusk: Trixie...
T: Yes?
Dusk: could you please remove your hand?
T:Remove it from where?
D: My leg? And it's quite high up my thigh?
T:... Is it?
this give you an idea oh great and benevolent author dude? XD
2729961 Well, I've figured out how Dusk's past is going to affect him and I think I've found out a way to make him seem more badass than he already is by giving him total reign of emotions, But I'll leave it at that.
So is with Fluttershy or was that a one time thing ? Plus who else is he gonna end up with ?
Barb a lesbian? Aww no...
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The cervix is a part of female anatomy that can't be penetrated that way. It appears in a lot of writing, but it is inaccurate. Penetrating the cervix would be incredibly painful for both parties, as would even hitting it with too much force.
Dusk giving good advice... helping Dash, basically becoming less... obnoxious and his doctor's visit being more stranger...
My greatest guess, since there is an implication of clop and romance within this chapter... Dusk Shine, is dying... and he's savoring his last moments.
the clop was ok, but rushed. if you plan to do more id suggest you need to go into more detail.
otherwise great chapter
I saw a comment about magic, and I must agree this story is magical. Some how mind got clearer reading it. (No joke's since I know they are coming from someone lol.) Anyway great chapter as always, and looks like Dusk has the split personality thing like with Pinkie, and Pinkamena. Oly it appears he goes from Bada** A**hole as some would probably describe him. To nice guy, and then to the one that gives mares a great time if ya catch my drift.,
Thank you good! I don´t even wanna imagine how much and at what he would have nagged:
"No, you have to lick it this way. Use your tongue more!"
"Grip harder, that´s what your muscles are for."
"What do you mean "i cum"? Where am i in this part?"
etc.
That would have been a mood killer.
But how come neither of them is worried that RD might get pregnant cause they used no protection? Or was RD on one of her safe days?
2731487 we'll see about that last part.
This...this was just...amazing..
Awesome story looking 4word to the next chapter
Sooooooo......... Is dusk and dash a thing now.........what about fluttershy
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Maybe he's been replaced by a Changeling, lol
or maybe the nice-ness of the folk around him is starting to rub off on him.
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Honestly have to agree with this idea, it would make some serious sense when you think about it. He might have some magical tumor or something, that would also explain the glowing eyes, his magic is actually eating away at him because his body can't contain it all. (The Glowing Eyes are basically a sign that his magic is backing up on him. If I remember how stuff like that worked in most other works with this kind of thing.)
So Rainbow Dash was the first. Yet, another unexpected twist. I wonder who number two will be? I found Dusk to be...uncharacteristically nice and supportive. Is this part of why the doctor keeps visiting him?
should be "He stared at the pegasus suspended in the air by the protective bubble he'd placed around himself at the last second."
3986861 fixed it.
3988484 its not the cervix its the heymn.
I think Rainbow Dash is going to have a kid. And now I know that she is not only a lesbian. She is a bisexual.