Page generated in 0.024 seconds
Total duration
1,103 users online
1,703,711 hits today, 1,872,792 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Goddamn you and your logic about cliffhanger.
but then again it would be a shame if someone held you captive and forced you to write in exchange for food
Oh dear, seems like Dusk has a little something-something that could possibly have adverse affects on the lassies. But I wonder how bad it will affect them, what symptoms may plague them.
Dusk is gonna be in for a very wild ride if this goes on the way I think it will.
GA YA BLOODY BASTARD AND YOUR CLIFFHANGERS!
2769360 static4.fjcdn.com/comments/cbobrow+rolled+a+random+image+posted+in+comment+12+at+_57e422d95505c6689bc15c8c32c47e70.png
I think I might hate you now wait a minute I do I do hate you! FUCKING CLIFFHANGERS
I assume you're talking about me there, and you're welcome even if you misspelled my name.
But god damn your cliffhangers! While I admit I enjoy pulling them just as much, you do it so much worse!
Your welcome. Didn't think that it would give you ideas for his personality since you seem to pretty much have thing plan out, and ready to go so that they flow along with the story, but aren't predictable. Also nice strategy with the cliff hanger although it kinda felt like a slap in the face, but will keep people interested, and coming back for more.
Looks like dusk has a pattern going with the kindness he show to other ponies, and their feelings which see like a night way to make it similar to canon (as far as I know) Dusk, but working in your own style as well. So long comment go show good sir good show.
2769433 you mother f$&@?! Goddamned cliffhangers
2769544 fixed that.
2769663 img.pbooru.com//images/138/18d95555229c794142262312b1b9d7f2f3060fe1.png
You pulled me in so hard...only to smack me upside the head and knock me back down....dat cliffhanger...
2769804 img.pbooru.com//images/138/18d95555229c794142262312b1b9d7f2f3060fe1.png
my theory regarding the extra scar he got from nightmayo moon
is that he's leaking magic ; magic is slowly being drained from him from the scar. and that Some part of Nightmayo moon's Evil essense seeped into him
or dark magiks and stuff
anyway, good chapter :3
and fuck you for giving us a cliff hanger >:/
2769945 Once again: img.pbooru.com//images/138/18d95555229c794142262312b1b9d7f2f3060fe1.png
2769947
FFFFfff th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/299/4/3/rage_face_by_rober_raik-d4e0fxk.png
2769951 media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ls7phc0oUB1qf64rp.gif
geat chapte- oh wait cliffhanger
Your on my list
2769986 Next chapter's almost done.
2769993 oki doki loki looking forward to it!
consider yourself removed from the list
for now...
2770003 fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/036/0/9/pinkie_pie_hopping_with_tongue_out_vector_by_pangbot-d4orh11.png
2770021lol
i will find every cliffhanger and destroy it even though it builds suspense, its still damn annoying , o great chapter by the way but reaper dont you think you made it a little to quick for luna ?
2770138 Not really.
2769954 oh ye lovable fak
btw, is dusk's hair permanently slicked back since the black snooty thing>?
2770196 Not yet, but it will be after this chapter. Thanks for reminding me.
2770202
oh chure, snot a problem
Fell right back asleep again, already snoring like an Ursa Minor. Dusk snorted.
"Really? I put you to sleep?"
your lucky the next part is out or i would of hunted you down and force you to do the story then once its done let you go and pay for your first month of theropy trust me youll need it
So Dusk is falling for the other five mares? Fair enough. Even though, I thought is would have been next to impossible with him and Pinkie Pie (last I read, he did not like her.) It also looks like Barb and Trixie are a dysfunctional couple of sorts. That's going to be hilarious. Well, let's see what episode the next chapter brings.
I really liked Dash in this one as she was serious and pushy but still considerate. Poor Luna is pretty emotional here with her savior thinking about and having sex with other mares than her.
But Dusk is still...i dunno. He just seems to go from one extreme into another in a matter of seconds and i´m never sure whenever he is sincere or not. In the earlier chaps it was clearer that he was always annoyed or pissed off or arrogant about something.
NOOOOOO!!!WHY YOU CUTE IT!!!!1