TaviDash
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"Encunter," is that intentional?
This is quite nice ^^ a good work.
Trigger: dominance and devotion, rage, prostitution.
The first part made me let out a tear (Yeah, like a good little sad part of a story can't). I would totally love this if Octavia didn't submit to him easily, and the colt's anger would stay for a little longer. Also, 18 inches? That's a big no-no (No pun intended).
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I appreciate the honesty. Like I said, it was written on a whim and posted on a dare, no planning or anything, so I may go back and change a few things.
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Thank you very much :3
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Not at all. Half asleep while writing does that for ya XP
good story thumps up and hope you make a second part to continu this story it dont seem complete
but you get a like and a fav
Eh, it needs work, but it ain't bad. I'd love to see you expand on this a bit.
If you're going to change anything with this story, expand it. Octavia doesn't suffer, which was the entire point
This is a really good story congrats on your first time. I wish it was longer though. would you take in making a second part?
Not bad! I hope you write a sequel.