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Now all the season 4 shinanigans can start yay
You still have a typo in the short blurb that appear on the featured page.
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Please tell me Goldenblood will die slowly and painfully.
Perfect! Simply perfect! Great chapter!
Gary Sue
Quick make another chapter I want see there reaction
OMG Iloved this chapter and OMGInever thout this day would come but Ifill sorry for BlueBlood for his past,And I'm sosad for Rays true past and wonder what happed to his dad.I wonder why he didn't ash Tia to marry him ,And Ican't wait for them to find both the night and day princesses are pregnant.this just keep getting better and better I can't wait to see what happens next.
Why he didn't proposing marriage to Celestia?
If it's not to much.....can you or i ask Prince Ray Auditore (if that's okay) to assassinate goldenblood
Sorry to burst your bubble, but actually, ‘next client: Celestia part 2’ was bigger by about a thousand words.
Ohhh yes, I smell some sacred birth chapter soon.
Glad to hear about you dude, and see the story is going, although I'm still wondering where this Grogar treat will start to get even more serious but at least they are now in the move
How is he an alicorn king when he is neither an alicorn (in the sense of being a horse/pony with wings and a horn) nor possesses an alicorn (in the sense of the original definition as the horn of a unicorn)?
are there gonna be sunset shimmer he’ll gonna meet?
Loving this entire series, also I know it's not relevant but when looking for an editor, is it a paid thing or is it something people just do, I ask this because I am planning to upload my first chapter of my first ever story and i want to know what to expect from potential editors
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Literal translation it would be like: "You are already dead Human! "
After reading the first chapter, I can tell this story is going to be loaded with typos, and errors. You need an editor, or a better one of you already had one. But, the idea of the story sounds good, so I'll continue to read.
Common mistakes are typos, lack of proper grammar, and not capitalizing things that need capitalizing ( Titles, beginning of sentences, names)
I'm going to withdrawl my previous comment about the mistakes and typos. Both improved after the first chapter, and the story itself is one of the most addicting I've ever read. I greatly hope that you will continue to update it.
To be honest, I liked the main character before he became alicorned, it made it easy to put yourself in his shoes. And I know that it's to reward the characters, with big titles, but if he made them alicorns too, the main 6 (apart from twilight because it would be to make it like the actual show), I don't like that idea. I would be fine if they were just given big titles and went on with life, but if they were alicorns, think about them walking down the street, people would know, it's the princess. And they would get little to no end of people flocking them, fluttershy would be too scared to walk outside. But otherwise I still like the story.
nice,finally a Blueblood redemption arc