By pure coincidence seven virtually unknown ponies come together and become friends. They are all different in some way, but it doesn't become evident until one reveals their true origins. Soon the whispers begin, ponies' attitudes toward them begin to change, and some ponies just aren't acting normal. Vinyl Scratch begins acting skittish and distant. Lyra goes missing for weeks. The only ponies who they think can help have been sent away on an emergency mission to the Crystal Kingdom, but no one seems able to talk about it. This is not the world the Destroyer 7 remember and it is not the world they'll stay in.
Chapters (3)
I knew it! Windows is the heart of all evil! Sorry I saw the pic and had to say it. I will put you on my read later list, you will be number 1165..so sorry if I don't read it anytime soon.
~Hearn
I came back to check on your story since I know how OC stories sometimes get a raw deal on this site. Seeing as you had more dislikes than likes I choose to take a quick look at it. There is a big problem glaring me in the face right off. I can not tell who is talking most of the time, and because of this fact, I feel like I am kicked out of the immersion from the very start. None of this compares to what would seem to be human-turned-into-ponies in this story. I hope if that is the case that you will explain how that happened because people on here really hate "Oh now the human is a pony...cause no reason."
Understanding that this is meant to be an introduction just makes it more off-putting. There is nothing really learned other than a few ponies names. You did not even address the fact that a few of the ponies may have been human or not. Now I am willing to read the next chapter, now in fact. Give me a few while I read.
~Hearn
Yeah, those dislikes are most likely from people looking at the introduction seeing not much description next to the first lines and choosing to dislike your story right there. I am going to fav this and keep a very close eye on this story. I wish you luck writing the rest.
~Hearn
2474257 Haha! I didn't even think about that!
2475064 I highly appreciate the fact you came back to read my story, and that you're willing to watch it. Thank you. I understand that there are details that need clarified, which may involve me going back and doing some editing. I also noticed some things are redundant too. I should probably look for an editor if I really want this to take off. Hopefully subsequent chapters will adequately reveal the origins of each pony, but I don't want to reveal too much right now because it's really not the main focus of the story. Again, thank you.