Okay, please kill Fylo. I don't care how, JUST DO IT! AND MAKE IT PAINFUL! NOBODY MAKES FLUTTERSHY CRY! NOBODY! AND SHE BETTER NOT EVEN DARE TO EVEN THINK TO TOUCH HER!
(Also, I get the feeling she's going to try to ruin families and ruin the innocence of children.....Fylo, Celestia called. THEIRS A PLACE FOR YOUR HEAD OVER HER FIREPLACE!)
AH-HA, I remember something. Pinkie Pie. Nobody can corrupt her. Get ready for everybody's favorite game, 'Whack a slut'. I'll go get the giant hammer.
pfft, we all know the only way Fluttershy would ever resist is because she'll be insistent on being the one to dominate her friends after Fylo is through with her.
2752503 psycho... This storry must be some kind of meta joke. Its about a crazy sex god who love to torture and its writen by a sex god who love to torture. Fucking hell :I
If you don't write another handful of chapthers i will personaly reinact them in real life. With real horses and then film it, and then send the tape to you and then blame it all on you. And then... And then some... And after that some more. You have brought this on yourself!
2758130 2751212 2759899 You know what, no. I can't do this. You people MAKE ME SICK. This is what's wrong with America!!! People having no morals and losing the traditions that made this country great. What happened to the family unit!? What happened to the great society built on the backs of hard-working folks and religious devotion!? This is not what our founders intended!!! I dream of a better America! Where people have Bibles instead of abortions, where people choose abstinence instead of fornication, where they moral fiber of America is back and we show the world that we are the best nation in the world! I choose a better life, a more wholesome life, I choose to take the high road while all of you rot away your eternal souls and burn in the fire forever. I'm going to delete this story and am going to Bible school. I'm going to challenge my local Democratic senator and as God as my witness I am going to win. I'm going to fight against degenerates like you and return America back to its former glory!!! God bless you all!!!
Also the new chapter is up, you might want to check it out.
"What about smoking!?" Fylo was actually becoming angry. "Smoking is banned." "What...the...fuck!?!?" The alicorn yanked on the leash hard, almost sending Rainbow Dash crashing onto the ground. "By who!?"
"Twilight and Luna must save the town before it becomes completely corrupted by her power. ยท HAHAHAHAHA_no "
Juxtaposition win!
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Aren't we a clever devil?
Ooooohhhhh
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We demand thou continue thy story!
Okay, please kill Fylo. I don't care how, JUST DO IT! AND MAKE IT PAINFUL! NOBODY MAKES FLUTTERSHY CRY! NOBODY! AND SHE BETTER NOT EVEN DARE TO EVEN THINK TO TOUCH HER!
(Also, I get the feeling she's going to try to ruin families and ruin the innocence of children.....Fylo, Celestia called. THEIRS A PLACE FOR YOUR HEAD OVER HER FIREPLACE!)
AH-HA, I remember something. Pinkie Pie. Nobody can corrupt her. Get ready for everybody's favorite game, 'Whack a slut'. I'll go get the giant hammer.
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That would imply that she's innocent. There's going to be some funny parts coming up, and Pinkie Pie's going to be part of it.
2425595 Be careful, heretic. I can see through your Slaaneshi tricks. Be glad I have not slain you in the name of the God Emperor.
Using Fylo in an RP... Fylo's 'bout to get DISSED! She's gonna get beat at her own game!
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Lolwut?
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You've been warned.
2425595
I thought Fluttershy was next? You tease...
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She is. Next part's called The Shy One in the Shadows.
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This story.
Hot damn.
Why is this here---> โWelcom to...oh my god!!โ The woord god sould not be here.
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jpd.typepad.com/.a/6a00d83451cd8169e20167666aae17970b-320wi
Pace yourself, my good author! If you use up all the nice fetishes with Rainbow Dash, what'll be left for the others?
Everypony deserves a share, and everypony deserves to be shared! Sharing is caring, after all...
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_paraphilias
Yeah...I'm not gonna run out.
Can`t wait for more
*coughs awkwardly* oh...oh my....
Why is this not updating I was promised corrupted Fluttershy please deliver
this had every tag under the sun on Equestria After Dark. Further investigation is required.
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....Why do I get the feeling...That this is a spoiler...?
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pfft, we all know the only way Fluttershy would ever resist is because she'll be insistent on being the one to dominate her friends after Fylo is through with her.
HAHAHAHAHA_yes
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Finally, the birth of a new, twisted as hell clop story. Let it begin...
PS: On a side note, you almost consistently miss introductory clause commas. Just mentioning it for now.
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I don't have an editor, shit happens.
Will there be a chapter 4?
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No, I felt the perfect ending was Fylo jizzing into a tub of flour.
2752503 psycho... This storry must be some kind of meta joke. Its about a crazy sex god who love to torture and its writen by a sex god who love to torture. Fucking hell :I
2752503
Sarcasm?
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No.
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2742776 hmm... so... maybe?
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So no more new chapters?
If you don't write another handful of chapthers i will personaly reinact them in real life. With real horses and then film it, and then send the tape to you and then blame it all on you. And then... And then some... And after that some more. You have brought this on yourself!
BE WARNED!!!!
2757031 ...huh... well that explained... .... ...nothing.
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You know what, no. I can't do this. You people MAKE ME SICK. This is what's wrong with America!!! People having no morals and losing the traditions that made this country great. What happened to the family unit!? What happened to the great society built on the backs of hard-working folks and religious devotion!? This is not what our founders intended!!! I dream of a better America! Where people have Bibles instead of abortions, where people choose abstinence instead of fornication, where they moral fiber of America is back and we show the world that we are the best nation in the world! I choose a better life, a more wholesome life, I choose to take the high road while all of you rot away your eternal souls and burn in the fire forever. I'm going to delete this story and am going to Bible school. I'm going to challenge my local Democratic senator and as God as my witness I am going to win. I'm going to fight against degenerates like you and return America back to its former glory!!! God bless you all!!!
Also the new chapter is up, you might want to check it out.
Loved that part....
2765885i agree with you
"THANK YOU, MISTRESS!"
Killed all your boners!
Is it weird that I became horny as fck as I read the chapter?
2742776 how many of you watched it to the end?
Oh my! ( Coughs quietly ) I am utterly aghast but i must keep reading!
2738674 odd...that's exactly why I'm here. I was like "half a page of tags? ... Investigation is needed...