2284534
I lied, I meant today.

Cant wait for it to continue

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MOAR!

Woah, that got way hotter than the first chapter.

Can't wait for more.

Ohoho, very sexy! I can't wait to see what fetishes she'll inject into Rainbow next!

Especially since they'll be irreversible. So, even once they've finally defeated Fylo, Rainbow Dash and her friends will retain something to remember her by..!

2323100
Who said anything about defeat?

whoa...just whoa

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I did.
Of course, there's no telling what's actually going to happen, so I can only repeat my earlier statement: That it would be satisfying to me if Fylo was defeated in the end- preferably after having inflicted permanent mental and physical damage to one or more of Twilight's friends via sexual torture and instilling them with shameful, humiliating fetishes (both of which happen to me mine).

Dude! This is very well done. I can tell a lot of careful thought went into this.

2324477
Never give up! Never surrender!!!

Damn Fylo certainly is going to have to step up her game when it comes to the others. Can't have her break them all the same way after all ^,.,^

2325045
Oh trust me...she won't.

Piercings that give a pony fetishes? Have you been playing a certain game?
Ignoring that, I love this story. The way you describe everything is pretty nice, and it's very creative.

2327343
...................................................................Maybe.

This story slightly disturbs me........i love it

rings that give ponies fetishes...... is there any way I can get those online?

2329265 what game, cause I want it. S&M is my fav past time. Is there flyo art?

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I do have another account where I write normal stuff, but I didn't want to write normal stuff on one hand and then completely debauched and deranged stuff on the other. I was afraid that if I did anti-clopping people would flame my regular stuff. Plus, it's much easier for me just to keep them separate, but the picture used for this isn't mine. The source for the picture is on here.

2367684>>2368456
Since somepony forgot, CoC can be found here:

Fenoxo.com

Although, SweetAJ, I will warn you that you should watch what you eat.

2381599 now you've got me exited. And ive got a stomach of steel. Thanks

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An upset stomach is the least of your worries. Some of the things you may find will go right to your rear, or chest[1], or feetpaws. Not to mention that some things are rather addictive. There is even something that will make all your hair fall out, (for fun, try two large ones).

[1] What's that? You're male? Have some B-cups anyway.

I came

let someone resist please

Do I detect some CoC influence here? The demon girl that tries to enslave the PC? The fetishes are the same and in the same way. That earns you a Spike!

2777968 it was Ceraph and I noticed that too

2329265 so, now that several of us are on the same page...WHAT THE FU-BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!