Some ponies believed that moon Pies were just a Myth, but one lonely Princess knows better.
come, join the Lunar Princess as she rediscovers her forgotten passion for the Pies she once loved.
Some ponies believed that moon Pies were just a Myth, but one lonely Princess knows better.
come, join the Lunar Princess as she rediscovers her forgotten passion for the Pies she once loved.
I saw about a bazillion grammatical mistakes in it. But otherwise it's an interesting story and I'll fav it.
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i know i'm sorry about the mistakes.
English is my second language... sadly it is also my first an third. :{
2226438 You should try getting an editor. Then those little mistakes will be fixed.
Wow... didn't expect that last line... which made the story even funnier...