Wow, you're right! This got popular fast! Well, congratulation man! No wonder actually... it was an unique idea and new kind of human. It's not a really common fic, so it immediately picked up everyone's interest... My reaction when I saw that story: ''Clop, Spa Ponies, body builder? Hohhooo, this will be really hard and rough... that's what she said...'' So yeeeeeaahhh....
Well it took me a day to decide if I should read this. The story is good but has some grammar/spelling errors but I congratulate you for this story to be in the Featured Box.
I usually comment on the recent chapter but I thought I should post this pic here
She pulled off her mane restraint then shook her head, splashing her mane around then cocked her head back, flipping her mane back and to the side. She stopped and looked to me with fluttering eyes, her mane was drooped down and dripping wet.
Getting popular? With cover art like THAT it's hard not to! And then there's a fairly well-written and certainly unique story behind it to boot. Congrats man, you earned it.
… “dating was over-rated” – You don’t need the dash between ‘over’ and ‘rated’. It’s one word: ‘Overrated’. ... "you guys mad my day" - I don't often notice these things in the Author's Notes, but 'mad' should be 'made'.
Okay, onto the story. I kind've liked how certain things had gone, given how NOW we have a bit of a personality that the character can grow from. It wasn't much in terms of content, but at least they don't seem as bland as the previous chapter made them seem. This could have gone a bit better, but honestly, ANY development by Chapter 3, might as well be taken as "late but worth it". Of course, mentioning a physical attribute (hair) in the shower scene, for the first time, was pretty strange. I mean, it's something the viewer can use to envision the character!
"Great! At least we're not reading the story of Fabio in Equestria, since they have short hair!"
Jokes aside, other things I noticed: Damn your character can sure eat a lot. Jeez... Maybe I just have a ridiculously large idea of what size the bowls are, but... WOW.
Alright, things seem to be tying together at this point. I like it. Next chapter!
Hot tip: To many of the sentences does begin here with " I ",... after some time it becomes really, really annoying... But non than the less, not bad work ^^
Wow, you're right! This got popular fast! Well, congratulation man!
No wonder actually... it was an unique idea and new kind of human. It's not a really common fic, so it immediately picked up everyone's interest...
My reaction when I saw that story:
''Clop, Spa Ponies, body builder? Hohhooo, this will be really hard and rough... that's what she said...''
So yeeeeeaahhh....
Good job and have a good night!
~Adam
GOOD GOD MAN! You're popular!
Doesn't Hawaiian pizza have ham?
Well it took me a day to decide if I should read this. The story is good but has some grammar/spelling errors but I congratulate you for this story to be in the Featured Box.
Hey great story. Im hooked and will be reading your story. So far it's really good. Moustache for you
I usually comment on the recent chapter but I thought I should post this pic here
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It's good to know we mad your day.
Getting popular? With cover art like THAT it's hard not to! And then there's a fairly well-written and certainly unique story behind it to boot. Congrats man, you earned it.
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No offense intended. I just couldn't stop laughing at that.
Alright, let's see if this held up.
… “dating was over-rated” – You don’t need the dash between ‘over’ and ‘rated’. It’s one word: ‘Overrated’.
... "you guys mad my day" - I don't often notice these things in the Author's Notes, but 'mad' should be 'made'.
Okay, onto the story. I kind've liked how certain things had gone, given how NOW we have a bit of a personality that the character can grow from. It wasn't much in terms of content, but at least they don't seem as bland as the previous chapter made them seem. This could have gone a bit better, but honestly, ANY development by Chapter 3, might as well be taken as "late but worth it". Of course, mentioning a physical attribute (hair) in the shower scene, for the first time, was pretty strange. I mean, it's something the viewer can use to envision the character!
"Great! At least we're not reading the story of Fabio in Equestria, since they have short hair!"
Jokes aside, other things I noticed: Damn your character can sure eat a lot. Jeez... Maybe I just have a ridiculously large idea of what size the bowls are, but... WOW.
Alright, things seem to be tying together at this point. I like it. Next chapter!
Im still trying to figure out wat da fukc is goin ON
Hot tip: To many of the sentences does begin here with " I ",... after some time it becomes really, really annoying...
But non than the less, not bad work ^^