• Published 25th Feb 2013
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Coming Soon to a Computer Screen Near You... "Pony Version" - TimeTravelinc



One-shots short trailers, idea from my FanFiction.net website

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A Scientist in the Bermuda Triangle in Equestria

It all started a long time ago, on Earth... "I want to be better Charlie." It shows a scientist messing with chemicals, then suddenly explosion.

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"I want to do more Charlie." James said. He looks at the computer, as it shows raining code, moving faster and faster. Suddenly there's the sound of thunder, and nothing but blankness.

Alarms go off in a facility, a twister starts to rage out of control of a machine. Soon, darkness again.

It then shows a bright orange bug, driving away from the twister as it carries the facility away, across the island. James looks at his dog, to which Charlie whines. He then looks at the road in front of him, avoiding many debree. He then makes it home. James enters his house, as he sees the twister come up to his front lawn. He closes the door, locking it. "Whew, that was a close one. Good thing it's passing us... Wait?"

Suddenly the house shakes, knocking him off his feet. It shows outside as the house lifts up and carries the house upward through the twister. It then shows a lot of stuff going through the twister. Suddenly the screen turns black, hearing a echo of thunder.

"Dude, I don't think we're in Kansas anymore."

The door opens to reveal much more brighter colors. A pegasus smiles at him as he looks upward. "Welcome young wizard, to the world of Equestria." Celestia said. James looks around, then looks back at the Alicorn. "I'm no wizard, I'm a scientist." he says.

James is carried to Canterlot by carrage. "This is my sister Luna." "How do you do?" Luna said. James looks around, then says, "Great."

Thunderclouds form over the Everfree, heading toward Ponyville. "We'll need your help Professor." Celestia said, "There is a dark evil that is about to take over Equestria, and only you and the Mane Six will be able to stop it." It shows several scenes where there's a explosion in the castle, a twister over Twilight's Library, stange soilders shooting lazers, and a speeding car going through the forrest, while James holds on to Rainbow Dash speeding up to catch up with the self driving car.

"This should be good." James said.

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A Scientist in the Bermuda Triangle in Equestria

Author's Note:

Me again. Yes, I know it seems similar to the trailer of "OZ: The Great and Powerful", but that doesn't stop me from kinda paroding it. Why am I parroding it? IT'S AWESOME!!!

Your argument is invalid
oh wait...


That's better.

I wish this website had a General section, so I could place this story undernieth it. And the reason why? Because, this'll have more than just one genre. At least this pile of shot stories.

Enjoy!

PS: Also I fixed it, so HA! Some of these events will be in this story.

Comments ( 6 )

... so you're putting up cheap 'trailers' which may even be transcripts of other people's work up here, in hopes of making us anticipate stuff that may or may not even be posted? You know that you could just as well (write and) post the stories themselves, right?
On the other hand, judging by this one's content, don't even bother putting them up.

Christ, that's a new level of pretentiousness unlike what I've seen before. More than the sickly military-focused dood or the one who can barely be legible and is convinced of the perfection of his language. Trailering like you'd get paid for it or like people even cared. Or, if applicable, thinking you're funny by putting up... this.
I'm somewhat surprised to even see this here, but then again, it's not the mods' job to judge fics. It's ours.

2177387 No, no. This is actually my writing from my webpage on FanFiction.net... except for the trailer of my story here "A Scientist of the Bermuda Triangle in Equestria". I wrote these trailers myself with the idea of using this to help with writers block... if I ever get it. Or when I need a break from my writings.

Also, I am kinda quick thinking, but slow typing... so don't judge me. Just read my other story if you think that this one-shots are kinda bad.

Re-edit: Ok, the fourth chapter needs reworking. I looked over it, and I basically rushed the end of the trailer.
I'll fix it. The only reason i didn't exactly place a lot of effort into the last chapter is because I wanted to post the story onto this website. They said I was under the word limit for the chapters, so I'm going to actually make the trailer better.

2177387 Dude... My thoughts exactly. :rainbowwild:

2177876 I fixed chapter, and added more.

Also, there's the whole trying to get your story posted, but your story is about 100 words short or something. So, I placed a lot more effort into the trailer.

2177969 Don't mean to plug my own story but go read 'Alone' on my page. You might get a few ideas from it :pinkiehappy:

Also, trying not to be offensive here but you should look into getting someone to proofread your stories. I noticed a few punctuational and grammatical errors in a few of em'.

2178026 Well, I'm a newbie. Give me a break, I thought it was a good idea to make trailers not only to inspire people, but also to write stuff down if I need a break from my other stories. And/or I get writer's block.

Have you read my story, "A Scientist in the Bermuda Triangle in Equestria"?
I think it's actually better work than my trailers. To be honest, writing trailers is pretty hard. I thought it would be easy... it wasn't

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