Princess Luna landed in the cool sand with a soft thud. Flapping her wings shut, she paused, letting her hooves sink easily into the dirt. She smiled, enjoying the feeling as she trotted across the sand dune to meet with her student, Twilight Sparkle. She was unsure as to why her student had brought her to the beach, but as she looked to her left, she couldn’t help but be amazed as the tiny waves rolled in and out from the ocean. Her very own bright, beautiful moonlight was the backdrop to this entire peaceful and romantic setting. The moon shimmered along with the stars, creating a gorgeous pale hue upon the waves. Luna stopped to admire them for a moment, taking a deep breath. If she looked close enough she was sure she could see them dancing.
Luna continued to trot along the edge of the water, until she soon noticed a smaller set of hoof steps in the sand. She smiled to herself as she began to follow them. As she continued following up the curve of the dune, it wasn’t long before she spotted her adorable purple marefriend. Luna felt her mouth twitch upwards into a smile. It was an automatic effect Twilight Sparkle seemed to have on her these days. Twilight was standing in the middle of the sand, her back was adorned with her signature cutie marked saddle bags. Luna stayed silent as she approached, watching bemused as Twilight seemed to be talking softly to herself. Luna strained her ears, trying to get a good listen, but she was unable to make out the exact words.
Twilight took one last deep breath as she recited the words in her head and focused her energy. She could feel the powerful spark begin to emerge from her horn and just as she was about to concentrate all of that energy into her spell, she felt two warm forelegs wrap tightly around her chest. Twilight gasped as the familiar scent of a certain Princess wafted into her nostrils. Luna nuzzled Twilight gently and Twilight quickly turned to stare at her smirking marefriend. Her cheeks burnt red as the energy in her horn subsided and fizzled.
“D-Don’t sneak up on a pony like that.” She squeaked, though she nestled deeper into Luna’s embrace.
“Sorry about that.” Luna whispered into her ear, gently licking the tip.
Twilight shivered.
“You looked so adoraKable for a moment there. I just couldn’t help myself.”
Twilight turned slowly in her marefriend’s embrace. “AdorKable?” she asked.
“Yes. Rainbow Dash told me it was a word for adorable nerds. You’re the cutest most adorKable nerd I know.” Luna teased, running a hoof through Twilight’s mane.
“I AM NOT A NERD!” Twilight protested.
“Yes you are a very cute nerd indeed. That’s why you are ADORKABLE!” Luna squealed, hugging Twilight tighter as the purple unicorn struggled in her grasp.
Unable to overpower Luna, Twilight pouted for a moment until Luna began placing soft kisses all over her muzzle. As the seconds passed, Twilight finally broke into a grin and her hooves wrapped around Luna’s neck warmly.
“So my little adorkable Twilight,” Luna chuckled. “Why have you summoned me to the beach? Not that I mind, it’s gorgeous and the company is wonderful.”
Luna winked as Twilight smiled for a moment, looking into the Alicorn’s turquoise eyes. She then unravelled herself from Luna’s grip and stood in front of her teacher, smiling brightly. She removed the saddle bags from her back and with a look of deep determination she pointed at Luna.
“I’ve been waiting for the day I could perfect this spell. I think I’ve finally got it now. Please let me show you?"
Luna looked surprised but nodded her head. She was suddenly aware of how excruciatingly quiet the night was. The only sound she could make out was the loud thumping of her own heart. She looked up into the sky as a light breeze blew past her face. Something exciting was about to happen and she could feel it.
Twilight stood very still and concentrated slowly. Luna waited, holding her breath. Again the breeze blew softly against her muzzle and it was as if she could feel the power surging from Twilight’s magic. Twilight opened one eye and smiled.
“Are you ready for this?”
Luna could only nod.
“Close your eyes.”
Luna blinked. Had Twilight really asked her to close her eyes?
Twilight motioned for her to close her eyes once more and the Princess huffed. Sensing Twilight was serious about this as the wind around her began to thrash and swirl, she reluctantly let her eyelids close. Princess Luna waited for several seconds that seemed to go on forever. Suddenly the wind died down and she could no longer feel the energy that had surged moments earlier.
“Twilight?” she called out, slightly alarmed.
When no reply was heard, Luna instinctively opened her eyes. It took a moment for them to adjust to the darkness. The moonlight that had featured so prominently earlier seemed to have dimmed and the only sound she could make out were the waves of the water as they repeatedly splashed against the sand.
“Twilight?” she called again, with more urgency.
“I’m here.” Twilight whispered.
Slowly Twilight emerged from the shadows and stepped into the small patch of light illuminated by the moon. Luna gasped softly as she tried to process what she was seeing. Standing before her was no longer the purple mare that had been there moments ago. Luna drew in a deep breath and blinked. Surely this was just a trick.
“Luna, it’s okay. I know this is a bit of a shock, but if you’ll come closer, you’ll see it’s really me.”
The Princess waited a few more moments before she proceeded to move towards the creature claiming to be her Twilight Sparkle. The creature smiled reassuringly at her, and Luna continued to inch forward until she was close enough to inhale the air surrounding the creature. She wrinkled her muzzle as an unfamiliar scent filled her nostrils. It was not unpleasant, but it was unlike any creature she had yet to encounter in Equestria.
“Luna...” the creature trailed off, before reaching out to the Princess.
Luna’s eyes widened as the creature extended its long, slender arm in her direction. Her eyes travelled down the creature’s arm, to the outstretched hand that was being offered, and the five fingers that wiggled, beckoning her closer. She felt her breath once again hitch in her chest as she slowly trotted forward. The Princess lifted her hoof, pressing it into the palm of the creature’s hand. She gasped again as her hoof was squeezed lightly.
Twilight waited breathlessly as she grasped Luna’s hoof tightly with her hand, using her fingers to apply more pressure. She waited for her marefriend to say something but Luna was lost in her own world. Twilight giggled. Luna was so cute when she was perplexed. The giggling caused Luna to look up at Twilight. She looked stern as she searched Twilight’s face. Their eyes met for a moment and Luna finally broke into a grin. Although her form was different, there was no mistaking her marefriend’s gorgeous violet eyes.
“Twilight! It IS you! But how?” The Princess asked, her voice rising with excitement.
“Do you like it? I thought you would.”
“It’s amazing! You’re...you’re....you’re.....” Luna tried, but the words failed her.
“Human?” Twilight supplied, smiling at her marefriend’s disbelief.
“Human!” Luna echoed, still in shock as she began to inspect her student’s new body.
“You haven’t seen anything yet Princess.” Twilight promised, as Luna began poking and prodding with her hooves.
Suddenly Twilight felt both of Luna’s hooves on the soft flesh of her backside. The Lunar Princess grasped at Twilight’s skin and began slowly kneading her bum.
“How absolutely incredible.” Luna said with glee. “No tail? Where did it go? This is the most complex transformation spell I’ve ever seen.” Luna mused, continuing her inspection.
Twilight shifted uncomfortably. “Uhm Luna, maybe you shouldn’t touch that because it’s very...ahhh...sensitive.”
Luna was in study mode and completely oblivious to the fact that her touching was having strong effects on her naked, blushing student.
“Your mane looks so strange.” Luna remarked, looking at Twilight’s shoulder length purple hair, complete with its signature pink streak running through the middle. “And these? How marvelous!” Luna quipped, as she wrapped her forelegs around Twilight’s midsection and began playing with her ample human chest.
“Princess...please...”
“So soft and squishy!”
“Ahh....stop...”
Luckily for Twilight, her marefriend was distracted yet again as she began to inspect Twilight’s fingers and toes. Twilight breathed a sigh of relief and looked down as Luna began a rant about the wonders of ambidexterity. To further illustrate the point, Twilight took both of her hands and gently cupped them around Luna’s muzzle. Luna closed her eyes as she nuzzled into the touch. Twilight’s hands were warm, and her fingers were now stroking gentle lines across the Princess’ face.
“Hands are wonderful.” Luna sighed blissfully, as Twilight used her fingers to reach up and stroke her marefriend’s mane.
Having fingers running through her mane and over her body was a completely different sensation for Luna. It was hard to explain the feeling, but she felt warm all over. Twilight’s saddlebag suddenly opened and a blanket flew out of it. She then sat down, motioning Luna into her lap.
“How did you do that without your horn?” Luna asked, dumbstruck.
Twilight grinned and raised her pointer finger. It sparked for a moment, emitting a small amount of magical energy before the light dimmed and it returned to normal.
“You managed to transfer your magic into this form as well?” Luna asked, incredulously.
Twilight nodded, reaching out with her arms to pull Luna down to the blanket with her. Luna looked up at her with awe.
“You....are....AMAZING!” Luna said, wrapping her forelegs around human Twilight.
“Have I shocked and amazed you?” Twilight chuckled, running her fingers up and down Luna’s tummy.
“More then you’ll ever know.” Luna cooed, loving the belly rub.
“Well Princess, I’m afraid you haven’t seen anything yet.”
Luna felt Twilight’s fingers as they ran up from her tummy, over her chest and once again to her face. Before she could question Twilight, she felt warmth on her forehead, right below her horn. Twilight smiled as her finger pressed softly into Luna’s forehead and she closed her eyes, concentrating slowly.
“What’s happening to me?” Luna asked, as her body filled with magical energy.
Twilight’s finger sparked once again and her saddlebag was opened. An object floated towards Luna and as she reached up to grab it, she realized it was a mirror. Her fingers wrapped easily around it and that’s when she realized something wasn’t right.
FINGERS????????!
Luna grasped the mirror shakily and looked at the figure staring back at her.
“OH SWEET CELESTIA!” she cried out. “I’M...I’M...”
“Human?” Twilight finished.
“GORGEOUS!” Luna grinned, breaking out into a huge smile as she admired herself in the mirror.
At that moment Twilight Sparkle experienced her first human facepalm.
To be continued...
YAY for human twilight and her ample chest!
Faceplant or facepalm?
2550466 thank u it was SPOSED to say facepalm lol fixed :) although faceplant is funny too hehe
Her ample chest me like
No! Why? What purpose does this serve? Why would Twilight transform herself into something that doesn't exist? Are you saying she figured out every little bit of biology related to humans within a few days and transformed herself on a whim? Why? That makes no sense! There is absolutely no reason for this to be happening! None at all!
... Ahem.
The chapter was okay up until the entirely unnecessary pointless plot shattering ridiculous transformation that should never have happened. Can we get a reset here? Take a mulligan? Time walk backwards? Repress this?
I'm sorry, but spontaneous human transformation is a bad idea for... Well... Any fic that doesn't already feature humans. And most that do as well, come to think of it. Just... Go back? Please? I get the feeling you're just doing this to set up for sex or something, and that's stupid. It has no relevance to story progression whatsoever.
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I am going to have to agree. This came completely out of left field.
Why? It wasn't foreshadowed at all. How? When are humans mentioned or hinted at?
I am just not seeing why this matters in the story.
But, it is your story. So you can do as you wish with it. I just don't think this is a good choice of direction.
Personal opinion though! I will keep reading.
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Agreed. Can we at least get some background for this? A reason would be nice.
Indeed.
I understand that Twilight is a VERY smart pony, but it humans do not exist in the universe of MLP, then Twilight literally created a new species. Which took figuring out all aspects of it's biology, anatomy and hundreds of other little things.
2551316 actually humans are to them like unicorns are to us.
in some fanfictions mention humans as things from folk lore and are not real.
storys such as the three little pigs and the big bad human,the human the witch and the wardrobe.
............okay i cant think of any good ones sorry
2550693 2550796>>2550796>>2551517 if u had paid attention u would realize this is not out of left field entirely lol....and I have stated numerous times there will be no sex in this story....do u remember twilight's interest in the Harry potter book Luna gave to her and the human folklore they spoke about? This has to do with that and there will be more background on it....give the author a chance to get to that before completely freaking out lol lol :)
Also any relevance to what can and cannot happen is really grounded by the fact we are dealing with singing dancing magical ponies lol
Keep your shirts on my friends...it shall all be explained and if you just simply hate humans twilight and Luna they aren't sticking around too long lol
Eta: twilight has been researching since she first got the book which as has been stated was at least two or three months now
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I'm sorry that it took me so long to reply to this story. Had a busy day.
Anyways while people were flipping the freak out. I got the Harry Potter inspiration and was day dreaming about Luna and Twilight having an OC Harry Potter LARP. Then using the fact that they still have magic to prank the ever loving heck out of Celestia and Lyra. OMC! Lyra would have an aneurysm if she saw Human Luna / Twilight.
But yes to all those out there who think that it can't happen. Or biological differences and what not. Diamond Dogs are sapient bipedal creatures. I can only imagine if bears exist than chimpanzees, apes, or other primates exist as well. Since Humans are bipedal primates, and Harry Potter exists in this story, as well as Humans existing as a whole in fannon mythology. As said before We are to them, what Pegasi and Unicorns are to us. So it is possible to extrapolate the creation of Homo Sapiens. Especially if the older stories there had pictures. With Twilight's super OCD, scientific brain it's not that far off that she used Transformation Magic to do it.
2551558 oh yeah forogt about that book also i was wondering if harry potter was a pony would his scare mark be his cutie mark or would it still e on his forehead?
harry potter the colt that lived lol.
harry potter played by......i have no idea
herminy or however you spell her name played by twilight.
ron played by......... again no idea damn mlp and your short list of colts. applejack?
snape played by luna (fuck it aint going to try to get gender correct actors.
cel as the headmaster both have a confusing plan for the main lead.
he who shall not be named be played by zombra or nightmaremoon ether or.
mouthro....whatever the fuck that dicks name was played by blueblood
and finally his lackys played by snips and snails. both have the same IQ points as the person there acting as
Not sure what to make of this. Agree that this was way out of left field. Yes she had to do a spell that would amaze her but agree that without prior mention she would have to figure everything out in a short space of time and to do it so simply is also out of left field.
2552228 not out of left field if u remembered Luna giving twilight the Harry potter book and the discussion on how Luna loved books about humans..it has also been stated that months have gone by since she first gave the book....( the wedding took place after she had been studying under the princess for 6 weeks and the last chspter took place a month after the wedding) so she has been studying for awhile....more will be revealed next chapter....trust the author my friend....and it will make more sense soon enough
2552124 lol thank u! I shall be referring everyone to this post who doesn't believe twilight could figure out how to conjure a human transformation....u have taken the words right out of my mouth!
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You're welcome. I'm glad I could help and I can't wait too see the next chapter. Congrats on a great Twiluna story.
2552361 That makes sense then. This is about to become major clop isn't it?
That was... unexpected? And not exactly my cup of coffee. Not sure if like, but I guess that's to be expected from some, right? Not a fan of anthros (but you already got that, of course). On the other hoof, great fan of TwiLuna (actually, mainly just Luna )
Anyway, up until now, great story. Will try to keep an open mind about this, though - if you can make this work for me, I will be very glad and you will most definitely hear about it.
Let the experiment commence.
2552648 no clop! Implied relations in the future but no clop :)
2552143 lol yes there are a lot of similarities ....celestia as dumbledore and the list goes on lol.... And u were right in ur previous post about how humans are to them as pegasi and unicorns are to us....at least that's how it is in this fic haha
you know... I really wanna see how Twilight reacts when she's groped with hands and fingers if hooves already get such strong reactions out of her *evil grin*
2552662 thank u for your comment...I did want the spell twilight learned to shcok and surprise...i knew I was taking a chance with this chapter because ppl have strong opinions on the human aspect of mlp....but all I can ask is what you have given me and that is a chance :) next chapter will clear some things up and they won't stay human for long ....thank again for the support
2552956 lol ill throw in some extra gropes just for u hehe
2551316 oops I meant to add you to a comment thread..anyways twilight has been learning this spell for a long time since Luna first showed her the Harry potter books. Months have been documented as going by in each chapter ...like before and after the wedding....and they talked about Luna's love for human folklore....u can bet twi has been reading up and studying....think of humans to them as pegasi of unicorns Re to us....anyways maybe I was unclear and so all shall be explained in next chapter :) thanks for the comment
2550756 i appreciate ur comments....but this didn't come completely put of left field....if u recall...twilight was given the Harry potter book by Luna and they spoke of human folklore.. Also there are various points in the story where I have stated for example a month had gone by since the wedding etc...so this wasn't spontaneous human transformation and I appreciate that u will continue to read and allow me the chance to further explain in the next chapter ..maybe I should have brought up the books again in reference but I wanted twilights spell to be a surprise lol looks like I got my wish...anyways thank u again :)
2553083 cant wait to see that^^ lol^^
just long enough to have some fun time^^ hehehehe^^
2553104 Oh, of course. I kinda forgot about the Harry Potter thing. Completely slipped my mind.
Then I have absolutely no complains about this chapter, it's perfect
Sweet Celestia I've been waiting awhile for this chapter. But of say it was definitely worth the wait. Loved the whole human twist didnt expect it (though I probably should've) but I can tell the next chapter will be...interesting. Thanks for continuing this fantastic story
2554709 thank u so much! This chapter seemed to be hit and miss with some folks but I am glad u enjoyed it :) ill try not to take so long with the next chapter! Thank u again for leaving a review!
They are so ADORABLE
I'm not sure if "the fuck" really does this justice. Not so much the ability to transform ( I read the comments), but Luna's reaction was... um... interesting...
2555114 lol thanks for reading the comments before posting...:) lol not sure if u meant Luna's reaction to twilights transformation or her own but either way Luna is easily distracted hehe
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sorry but the human just really throws me off this. so I might see ya on another story.
cheers:Twilightsmile:
Was disappointed in this chapter.. Everything was so well and then suddenly humans. It kinda killed it for me.
Well, this chapter killed the story for me . I am not into "pony-into-humans-and-the-other-way-around" stories. Either only humans or only ponies. Still, the chapter is well written, I might keep an eye on it.
2577096 2575305 2565868 you should continue reading...as stated the spell is temporary and this was only to showcase her showing Luna something amazing...I have gotten alot of ppl saying how much this sucks and I appreciate that you all care enough about the story to be worried about it's direction ...on that note....I hate spoiling the story but if its going to keep readers then I will say this...."you can expect them back in their original forms by the end of my next chapter." (And i had always planned it this way) Lol thanks for the reviews and have some faith in your friendly neighbourhood author :)
2555080 thank u! :)
2584009 it's not wrong because they are not blood related...two brothers can marry two sisters...and I think I watched a documentary once where twin brothers married twin sisters. Now that would be confusing lol but yeah because there is only relation by marriage it's all good :)
2658274 lol thank u! I am not overly fond of oc characters so I'm glad he came off well! Thanx for the comment!
2658110 lol so true! Haha thanks for the review!
awesome story :D, can't wait to read next chapter lol
Fun as Humans?
I like where this is going...
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that reminds me of a song(german), where a guy becomes his own grandfather
a guy marries a woman which has an adult daugther, his father marries that daughter, which means that the daughter becomes his mother, his wive becomes his grandmother, and he becomes his own grandfather.
That song goes even crazier when the girls become pregnant.
Why??? Why ???? WHY????!!!!!! It just stops... There has to be more... No!!! ShotgunNeko you must continue this fic, it was an awesome read.
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I bet three happy faces that you just spoiled "Equestria Girls"
:D :D :D
Not that I hate the idea, it's just that If you call a show "My Little Pony" you expect ponies. Not a spin off based around Anthropological versions of the pony characters.
2721726 read it again lol ...it says he was born OF a Pegasus pony (Fluttershy) lol but he is a unicorn. It is implied the unicorn part comes from discords magic. So yeah just a simple unicorn (if u consider being the son of the god of chaos and the element of kindness simple) hehehe
shit is going to hit the fan. i can feel it. and it will be fantastic.
This is so great I got so caught up in it reading chapters 1-12, I didn't even notice 2 hours flew by. When do you think you will have the next chapter done? Very good story.
2796795 working on it tonight....hopefully a chapter out by Monday :) glad u enjoyed! Thanx a lot for the encouragement
Soft and squishy of all the things luna of all the things
'OH SWEET CELESTIA!” she cried out. “I’M...I’M...”
“Human?” Twilight finished.
“GORGEOUS!” '
Why do I feel like this is a reference to 3rd Rock from the Sun? ^^