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Scootaloo has always wished she could fly, but she never expected it would come upon her like this. And why does she seem to have no family?

Sometimes acting like you're fine when you're really not is more transparent than it seems.

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Eh.

It's not BAD, but nothing happens. Like, at all. They wake up, it's mentioned Scoots has small wings, and they eat breakfast.

Seriously, nothing happens. It's a well written period of time in which nothing happens, but that's besides the point.

In the future, I'd suggest you put more together, maybe another chapter or two, before you release it.

Good start, though.

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