A nervous young stallion decides to take a shot at the new ruler of Equestia... and she accepts
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Swiper, I think I love you...
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So, I've got the happy/romantic/adult ending down #1, then the troll/random/comedy ending #2, and now the cutesy/PG-rated/softie/kiddie ending #3. I called this "Saccharin Dreams" in contrast to "Sweet Dreams" since (like saccharin versus sugar) it's not satisfying. But, oh well, I love my friends who dislike clop and prefer that softer saccharin taste.
All that's left is the 'My Little Dashie'-style sad ending... Are you guys looking forward to that one? Because I am SO NOT looking forward to writing it.
Seriously, I don't want to write it...
165921 Yes but think about it, you appeal to EVERYONE and keep all the endings great
Personally no.1 is my fav, but the sheer fact that you did all the endings shows that you really care for your readers, therefore making you a better write/author.
Yes.
I just looked at My Little Dashie again for writing inspiration in for when or if I do the depressing ending. Yeah, I cried. Of course.
I just... I don't know. I'm too emotionally invested in this story, and I've made the Strawberry character too personal for me. Even if I scream at myself that Ending I and/or Ending III are 'canon' [for this tangential universe to the main story], I know that if I take my idea for Ending IV out of my brain and put it into the written word-- in my heart it would become the main ending. It is the last chapter, after all. I'd probably sob as I'm writing it.
I mean I'm picturing the scenes in my mind, and it makes me want to cry again. Poor Strawberry.
Not to mention it will be immensely difficult to write and end up writing well, especially given all of the buildup.
I'd love it very much if all of you guys and gals that have read this, tracked it, favorited it, etc would let me know here what you think. Should I really go through with this and pull out a total MLD ending? Please comment! At this point, it's pretty much all about what the readers want.
If you want to appeal to all audiences, then I hope you have enough talent to appeal to my kind of audience.
The one that actually liked Cupcakes.
As for your emotional trouble with the sad ending, you could do what I do when I'm too emotionally invested.
Watch stupid videos on youtube.
Dont do what you dont want to do,if some will be butthurt over it their problem.
165569 After you said "every single power ranger" I said THIS IS THE ULTIMATE SHOWDOWN
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I would prefer that you didn't write it myself, I don't handle sad stuff very well sometimes. But, that would be selfish of me. Don't destroy this story for yourself, if you think there's a chance that the super-sad ending is going to become head-canon for you, don't do it. Otherwise, do what you think your readers will want.
I deffinetly prefer this ending to the cloppy one. Can't stand the disturbing images it conveys. But its great seeing an how much effort you put into your writing and how much you care for the readers.
On the sad story topic, I personally would like to see it. It would be interesting to see an ending that rivals with MLD. BUT BUT If you feel it'll destroy your view on the story don't do it.
...But are we going to get an ending where Celestia doesn't use the Cross Contamination excuse and lets them get hitched? @@ That's what I'm waiting for! @@
So...many...TEARS!
Cross-contamination? Booo. Disproved by Habsro, right here:
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See? Unicorn and alicorn princess.
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Note that Celestia did not say: "It will not happen because the rules about cross-contamination of princesses or princes with common ponies."
She said: "The rules about... about... Cross-contamination of the central royal bloodline are quite clear. That is not to mention the horrible scandal that would ensue. It is bad enough with what has already happened..."
Because (I'm assuming) it's a very different thing for, say, Prince Blueblood and Rarity to (hypothetically- of course- given what actually hapeened ) or Cadence and her companion to be a public couple... and for either Luna or Celestia themselves to take a mere unicorn husband. Theirs is the central royal bloodline, upon which the survival of Equestria is at stake. Celestia is thinking about--
A] The legitimacy of the throne, especially given what would happen to their kids (Those kids that very well probably would have compromised powers and live shorter lives)
B] What the public would say (Since most common ponies wouldn't approve or accept Luna being with a relatively unattractive dork... exactly how the British people didn't like and still don't like Prince Charles dumping Princess Diana for Duchess Camilla. Strawberry is a male Twist for Pete's sake!)
C] How it's going to be so hard to explain that Nightmare Moon is gone for good, with Luna also being back for good. Selling the public the story that it was the elements of harmony would be much, much cleaner and smoother.
I'm taking a dim interpretation of Celestia as one who puts herself and her royal position far above her sister's happiness... but... yeah. I'm going to do that.
If 16 is 25% as sad as My Little Dashie, oh man, I might be a little hesitant reading it.
I'd say write & publish it, you'll never feel the story being complete. But I'm afraid Kleenex might be out of stock.
celestia saying he can't be with moon was probably the thing that brought me close to tears...
i've never cried at a fic, i've gotten watery eyed but nothing more, and i've read all of the popular sad fics.
still can't find one sad enough to make me cry though.
Celestia, this is the third fic that made me want to hit you. The first being My little Dashie and the second its sequel.
But HA HA! you got the DEAL WITH IT all three times!
second best ending becuase it still leaves hope for the book to have a sequel (i hope) just like the first ending (only reason it is "second best" is becuase of the fact he took him to the moon i mean she has been trying all her power NOT to go back there ok no matter the reason.)
āIām taking you home, Strabwerry,ā
Strabwerry *snrk*