A nervous young stallion decides to take a shot at the new ruler of Equestia... and she accepts
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I'll upload the next one after class... for now, it's on to managerial economics...
I hope you guys like it!
Hoover DAM, brony!
You are a god among authors...
Goddamn man XD Your a legend!
the ending makes me cry....
still good all the same tho
Swiper ,I don't understand what happened to Fluttershy? She is frozen? Killed? or just froze in fear?
Ze plot, she thicken, no?
A few mistakes:
1.He leaned down, and he let out a sign.
2.No! She’d never do anything to hurt me. When we love it each other
Other than that, loved it! Can't wait for the next parts!
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he said something along the lines of she stole fluttershy's essence.
SO in a sense she did kill her, but technically she's just a stone body waiting for her "soul" or "essence" or whatever to be returned.
At least thats my guess.
DANG!
Drama bomb!
I hope everything ends fine...
Tears, so many of them!
nightmare saw the whole spectacle...
So much updating! Thank you
damn good chapters my friend
! Not Fluttershy !
moar!
My favorite pony...noo....and even worse Strawberry's pissed at himself for seein Nightmare in a different light. All bad.
Good chapter
I can tell this will have a happy ending.
come onnnnn post moar !
Poor little pony.
MOARRRR! I DEMAND IT!
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Fixed. Thank you.
And not a single tear was shed.
Is something wrong with me?
From about out of nowhere, a pang of anger appeared from deep inside of her. He kept it down, but it wouldn’t be refused. He found himself hopping back to his feet. His face clenched.
I believe is him not her
VERY good story my fellow brony VERY good
I have spotted some errors duo
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Fixed, thanks!
ok...i said i would at least wait until the final chapter but this is just too good! LIKED AND FAVORITED!!!