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Anon893


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Im`torial an high ranking military veteran from an Highly advanced human society known as the "Life seeders" located in a galaxy far from the world of equestria; Finds himself trapped in the inter-galactic void as an imense war wages in his home galaxy and destroys the Gate he used to travel across the space , leaving himself as a wanderer ,in the inmensity of the void, he finds an proper galaxy to settle in and call it "Home" at last after Billions of years of searching and sleep on his Craft known as the "Time-statis mothership" only to find things he tought were fantastical at first... but where actually as true as everything he knew beforehand.

NOTE : Please bear with me this is my first attempt in writing an story, so there might be quite a alot of grammar errors and the like throught the chapters, thanks!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 5 )

Stole the moon!(negates first)

Anything i could improve on my first chapter?

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There are quite a few grammatical errors and a few spelling errors but other than that 10/10

I'd recommend getting a proof reader.

Sorry guys, ive been trying to get info into proof reading for a bit now
Ill get on with chapter 2 soon though, i just dont really get good ideas as of now...

Currently planning on the story if anybody is still arround, im on the coast so internet here is real bad plus lights got cut off a few days ago while i was making chapter 2 (Hence the duped chapters)

P.D: By "Real bad" internet i mean 30kb max bad

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